magar kya maiN bhi usko chahta tha?

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Black_Mamba July 14, 2004, 10:27am 1

wo aik lamha
hazaaroN saal ka wo aik lamha
jab usski aankh se aNsoo rawaN thay
har ansoo miaN hazaroN ghum jawaN thay
meray dil ki faqat bus aik hasrat
laraztay hoNt uskay kuch tau bolaiN
taRaptay dil ke uske raaz kholaiN
wo uski har nazar maiN aik hasrat
ke uske dil ke ghum, pal ko tau so laiN
un ankhoN maiN andhaira cha raha tha
har ansoo dil mera taRpa raha tha
mujhay haiN yaad wo din bhi ke jub wo
hazaroN rang ankhoN maiN samaye
haseeN chehray ko baloN maiN chupaye
hawa ke mast jhoNke jaisi chalti
laboN ki surkhiyoN se sabha jalti
isharay se ussi ke sham dhalti
gulabi phool jaisay gaaloN par ab
khazaN ne apni zardi hai lagai
wo sookhay hooNt unmaiN chup ki jumbish
mujhay malooM tha kehna wo chahay
ke wo meri thee aur meri rahay gi
wo uski akhri koshish ke keh day
ke meray wastay har ghum sahe gi
magar ab sans uski tham chuki thee
laraztay hooNt uske ab thay sakit
magar kya maiN bhi usko chahta tha?

koiDost July 14, 2004, 6:33pm 2

Bahut Khoob LaLay :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR July 14, 2004, 8:20pm 3

zabardast :k:

Black_Mamba July 15, 2004, 9:42pm 4

thanks dost bhai.

thanks behna.

Azad July 15, 2004, 10:06pm 5

Maza agia

DiYa July 15, 2004, 11:28pm 6

Re: magar kya maiN bhi usko chahta tha?

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Black Mamba: *
wo aik lamha
hazaaroN saal ka wo aik lamha
jab usski aankh se aNsoo rawaN thay
har ansoo miaN hazaroN ghum jawaN thay
meray dil ki faqat bus aik hasrat
laraztay hoNt uskay kuch tau bolaiN
taRaptay dil ke uske raaz kholaiN
wo uski har nazar maiN aik hasrat
ke uske dil ke ghum, pal ko tau so laiN
un ankhoN maiN andhaira cha raha tha
har ansoo dil mera taRpa raha tha
mujhay haiN yaad wo din bhi ke jub wo
hazaroN rang ankhoN maiN samaye
haseeN chehray ko baloN maiN chupaye
hawa ke mast jhoNke jaisi chalti
laboN ki surkhiyoN se sabha jalti
isharay se ussi ke sham dhalti
gulabi phool jaisay gaaloN par ab
khazaN ne apni zardi hai lagai
wo sookhay hooNt unmaiN chup ki jumbish
mujhay malooM tha kehna wo chahay
ke wo meri thee aur meri rahay gi
wo uski akhri koshish ke keh day
ke meray wastay har ghum sahe gi
magar ab sans uski tham chuki thee
laraztay hooNt uske ab thay sakit
magar kya maiN bhi usko chahta tha?
[/QUOTE]

haa chatay ho
kasma say

abc1234 July 16, 2004, 5:18am 7

:k:

ASA July 16, 2004, 6:55pm 8

wow zabardast… bouhat he khoob.. :k:

Azad bhai ke reply se bhe pata chalta hai… k zabardast hai… coz inhooN ne “hummmm” nahi kaha..

DiYa July 16, 2004, 9:59pm 9

hehe
to kia kud nahi pari!
bus Azad kay remarks par guzra kia?

nia_khan July 17, 2004, 3:28am 10

jane yeh dil kis mithi ka bana hai
jis pe na demag ka na zuban ka bas hai

muhabatein adhori kio reh jatin hain?

lajawab :~)

ASA July 17, 2004, 4:42am 11

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by DiYa: *

hehe
to kia kud nahi pari!
bus Azad kay remarks par guzra kia?
[/QUOTE]

Azad bhai ke reply se bhe pata chalta hai....

Black_Mamba July 18, 2004, 1:53pm 12

Re: Re: magar kya maiN bhi usko chahta tha?

Thanks Azad bhai.

meray rafeeq mujhay daad detay jatay haiN
maiN apnay dard ki tash’heer kar gaya shayad
(Black Mamba)

maiN usko chah sakoN ye meri besaat kahaN?
maiN usko soch sakoN ye baRi ghaneemat hai.
(Black Mamba)

Black_Mamba July 18, 2004, 1:59pm 13

Thanks Irem

Thanks dear.

yaar Azad bhai is a sweet bhai na, abhi tak maiN ne jo bhi post kiya hai, wo zaroor sarahtay haiN.

Black_Mamba July 18, 2004, 2:01pm 14

dil tau hai dil, dil ka aitebaar kya keeje

Thanks

blushing_vision July 23, 2004, 8:52pm 15

great :k: