magaR afsOs hUm samjha nahi paa'ey usay kuch bhi

NikamiJano · November 1, 2007, 2:52am

kaha us ney K aa’khir kis lee’ye be-kaaR likhtay hAin?
ye shair lOg kyOn Itnay dUkhii ashaaR likhtay hAin

kaha hUm nay k az-khUd kuch nahien likhtay ye bechaRay
inhieN majbOor jAb karta hAi dil nachaaR likhtay hAin

ye suN kaR mUskuraii ghOr say dekha hUmieN, bOlii
tO acha aap bhi Is qism k ash’aar likhtay hAin

wO kya gham hAi jisay dOhra rahay hAin aap baRsOn say
wO Kya dUkh hAi Mitatay hAin JiSay Har Baar Likhtay hAin

magaR afsOs hUm samjha nahi paa’ey usay kuch bhi
k kyOn hUm bhi isii andaaz k ash’aaR likhtay hAin

wO kaisii aag hAi lafzOn meiN Jis ko dhaaltay hAin hUm
wO kya gham hAi jO raatOn ko pas e dewaaR likhtay hAin

hAi aisa kOn jO saa’Ray JahaaN say hAi hUmien pay’ara ?
wO kaiSa dUshmaN e jAan hAi Jisay gham-khwaaR likhtay hAin

Dushwari · November 1, 2007, 2:55am

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bohet achee nazam hey. lafz ba lafz, setch.
best.

Dushwari

Daanie · November 1, 2007, 3:45am

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nice sharing :)

Ali_2 · November 1, 2007, 4:18am

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Nice sharing NikamiJano :k:

redidentity · November 1, 2007, 4:46am

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Beautiful..

Shab-e-Hijar · November 1, 2007, 5:24am

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bohat khoob :k:

Shumaisa · November 1, 2007, 8:36am

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Zabardasst..
Thnx 4 sharin.

_Masoom_Muskaan · November 1, 2007, 8:56am

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boht khoob jano g :)

Sheal · November 1, 2007, 12:02pm

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bohot zaberdast nikami ji :k:

deadsoul · November 1, 2007, 2:00pm

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buhat khob

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · November 1, 2007, 2:11pm

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Buhat khoob Nikami Ji:-)

Precious_Khan · November 1, 2007, 4:30pm

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Kahaa Hum naY K Yeh Buhat Achchee Shaiiree Hay
Kaha NikammiJano nay Keh Post Issi liay Ki Thee

NikamiJano · November 1, 2007, 9:00pm

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good jawab pee^k

muddii · November 2, 2007, 5:37am

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Yeh Shaair Log Kyun Itnay Dukhii Ashaar Likhtay Hian?

Nice choice a usual NJ:)

NikamiJano · November 2, 2007, 4:35pm

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thanks muddi g ;)

muncho · November 2, 2007, 4:53pm

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umda hay g; arsa daraaz ki aik takraar laikin la-haasil;

Hamnah · November 2, 2007, 6:09pm

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lahasil..agreed.. mager phir bhi log likhtay hain ..true as well :)

being_lonely · November 2, 2007, 10:03pm

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Guud ghazal Nikami Jee :k:

waisay mujhe achi tarah yaad hai bhuula nahi hai aap ne abhi tak meri nazam suni nahi

NikamiJano · November 2, 2007, 11:30pm

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abhi taak sunanay k sources nahi haiN

NikamiJano · November 2, 2007, 11:30pm

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thanks dushwari :)