mae tera naam likhta mitata raha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Jhanjharewali June 20, 2007, 2:40am 1

raat sunti rahi mae sunata raha
dard ki daastan mae batata raha

log auoron se chahat nibhate rahein
ek wo tha,mera dil jalata raha

dhuup chhaon si uski tabiyat rahi
wo nigahen milata churata raha

dil ki mehman-khane mei raunaq rahi
koi aata raha koi jaata raha

hum-maktab ne saara sabaq parh liya
mae tera naam likhta mitata raha…

Aqls June 20, 2007, 5:55am 2

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bohat khoob

babri June 20, 2007, 6:06am 3

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raat sunti rahi mae sunata raha
dard ki daastan mae batata raha

log auoron se chahat nibhate rahein
ek wo tha,mera dil jalata raha

Zabardest.

moonmine June 20, 2007, 12:40pm 4

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zabardast!

Daanie June 20, 2007, 7:32pm 5

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buhut khoob :)

seem June 20, 2007, 8:55pm 6

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chhan chhan......boht khoob:biggthumb

Koyal June 21, 2007, 2:47am 7

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raat sunti rehi main sota raha :(

Nice one JW :)

chappal utar k

tahreem_saeed June 21, 2007, 5:30am 8

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khubsurat sharing Jw

Jhanjharewali June 21, 2007, 11:04am 9

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aap itna 'snore' karti haen?? :D

Jhanjharewali June 21, 2007, 11:05am 10

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thank u doston for appreciating :)