merii sabz rutoN ki jheel mien terii zaat hii ik phool thee gulaab thee, ik shabaab thee merii khwahishoN ki ameen thee
mae ne daan ki sabhii hasratieN
ye hijaR nahi azaab haii
jo janam janam pe moheet haii wo safar nahi talaash haii
merii ulfatoN ko bhula diya, merii nafratoN ka hisaab haii
mere rut-jagoN ki waja ho tum mere rut-jagoN ka hisaab du
merii chahatoN ki chandanii bina chaand k udaas haii merii baat ko na yun toul du merii chahatoN ka jawab du
mae ne zindagii tyaag dii
merii zindagii ka hisaab du
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bahot khoob.....HH...thnx for sharing...!
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beautiful :k:
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thanks reet and viv :)
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Zabardast :-(
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jo janam janam pe moheet haii wo safar nahi talaash haii
Beautiful.
What is 'tyaag' in second last line. I never heard this word or may be you wrote it differently. What does it mean?
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thanks ghazaluu…
tyaag… it meanz *“choorhna, kinara-kash hona” *
specially tum k liye dictionary khol k exact meaning dekha ![]()
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:k:
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Bohat khoob HeArT HaCKeR…:k:
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Very Nice Sweety :)
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Koyal, Aryaan, GS bhaii... thankoo :)
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Very nice poem HH ,thanks for sharing:-)