maazi / mustekbel

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Kheteye kheteye log thekh jateye hein
Sunaneye wala koe nahi hota
Yoon, kutch batien rhe jatee hein
Nahi ata jeb koe bhee
Nukta semjh meye, teb
Unginat baar likhee seb
Tehreerein mit see jateehein
…
Wafa keye badel ansoonon kee andhi meye
Bey-waza seye ho jateye hein
Baehe seye jateye heien,
Umeed ko baha leye jateye hein
…
Aur kabhi aisa hota heye
Kutch log kho seye jateye hein
Wohh milteye nahi hein phir dobara
Kabhi wapes nahi ateye wohh
…
Aur baaz khood seye door chaleye jateye hein
Shayid wohh wapas ana nahi chahteye!
Ya wohh aa nahi sakteye,
Kyoonkeye wohh apneye halaat ka mukabla nahi ker sekteye
…
Ya phir, kabhi jo dil kheta heye
Weisa nahi hota
Mager dil, bus wohh dil akeila rhe jata heye
…
Kisee aur kee galtee, saza aur koe heye jheeleye,
Yoon, kabhi gaem bherta hee rheta heye
Aur kem nahi hota,
Tow kabhi dhal bhen jata heye,

Leiken, iss gaem ko adat nahi bhenana heye
Werna phir yeye hal bhen jata heye
Iss ka rowgh sa leg jata heye
Iss ka rowgh sa leg jata heye

Dushwari

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Re: maazi / mustekbel

so true; nice g. eid mubarak.

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Re: maazi / mustekbel

Eid mubarak to you too, thanks, muncho.

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Re: maazi / mustekbel

ap itna acah likh laiti haiN dushwari :) wesay likhnay maiN koi dushwari tu nahi na hoti :D

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Re: maazi / mustekbel

Mujah say raha nahi giya :)

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Re: maazi / mustekbel

Koyal,
poem kee tareef kerneye ka thanks. aap ko apni poems likhneye meye kitnee dushwari hoti heye, itni heye shayid mujheye bhee hoti heye. :>
lekin chukeye hem poetry ko aik hunr manteye hein, is liyeye iss ko bey-ja hakeer nahi jaan sekteye.

best,
Dushwari

To set the record straight: the wife must obey her husband
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Re: maazi / mustekbel

qayamat ki nishani hay koyal lekh bhi sakti hay :hayaa:

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Re: maazi / mustekbel

jeb aik insani ehsas setchaee keye sath biyan kiya jata heye, tow chaheye mushkel ho, na mumken nahi.
han, bey-ja jhooth bolna, zaroor iss keye bolneye valeye insan ko degha deita heye.
iss meye heye shumarr aisa bhee lefzoon ka milap, jo mun ghareth lageye.
baat chaheye sekth ho, mager ager setch heye tow iss ko keheney seye dareigh nahi kerteye. iss ko likhneye ya perhneye meye mushkel ho, tow iseye, mushkel nahi kheteye. chukeye, is seye shayid kisi ka dil aur dimagh apneye halat ka jaiza leye sakeye aur iss kee zindagi badel sakeye.
best,
Dushwari

Help needed for crossword question
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Re: maazi / mustekbel

jo ap ne kaha theek hi kaha ho ga, her aik ka apna sach hota hay or woh ossi ko mobarak.

humara to bey-ja jhoot hay; marne ka jee karay ga aghar waqee koyal lekh sakti hay.

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Re: maazi / mustekbel

Dushwari me khud se nahi likhti dosroon shaa'erooN ki post karti is leay copy paste maiN zaida dushwari nahi hoti :D

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Re: maazi / mustekbel

koyal,
:>
best,
Dushwari