Maan

assalamu alaikum wa rahmatullahi wa barakatuhu
kaiay hain aap sab log umeed hay kay theek thak hongay.
well may aap logon say apni aik bohot hi zyada fav ghazal share karna chahongi IFTIKHAR ARIF sahab ki umeed hay kay aap logon ko achi lagay gi
Ho gayey jawan bachay boorhi ho rahi hay maan
Bay kwab ankhon main charag lo, wahi hay maan
Roti apnay hissay ki day kar apnay bachon ko
Sabr ki rida aurhay bhuki so rahi hay maan
Ghair ki shikayat par kabhi kisi shararat par
Mujh ko mar kar arif kud bhi ro rahi hay maan
Rokti thi mujh ko khailnay say jis matti may
Aaj us matti ko aurhay so rahi hay maan

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Very nice

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thanks Dislay bhai :)

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Bohat he achi ayr sachi
i have not any more comments for it
Thanks For sharing

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thanks for reading and liking it:)

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Always Welcome sister
waiting for some more stuf like this

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inshallah i will add a poem related to "maan" tomorrow :)

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INSHALLAH
and i m waiting for that poem

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very nice & touchy.....:(

thnx for sharing.......cutesponge

waiting for another good poem.........

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:(

Nice.... :(

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thanx reet and Golen scorpion for liking it and im gonna share a very amaizing poem by parveen shakir soon:)

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Very very Nice cutesponge… Beautiful..:flower2:

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thanks alot aaryan bhai:)

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wow! the last line is amazing!

wsalaam! :)

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thanks alot Rukhsarbibi:)