MAA mujh ko kisi ki nazar lagay hey

ya merey gharonday ko kis ki nazar lag gay hey
merey khelono ko bhe ake chup si lagay hey

merey angan may parey jholon ko
ake khud kalami si lagay hey
or
may jo muntazer MAA ki aghosh ka hon
heran pareshan sa pher raha hoon
liken ya merey MAA ko kasai chup si lag gay hey

may thaak chuka hoon merey paoon may parey ablay bhe
ya merey gher kay rastay may kasi aag si lagay hey

bari andheri raat hey or saibaan kuch bhe nahe
mujhey bari umeed hey terey any ki MAA ake ass si lagay hey

ake he raat may ujra hey ya chaman logon
ab tu es share ko ake baher ki umeed si hey

written by ghazalrizvi

Re: MAA mujh ko kisi ki nazar lagay hey

my friends i know it,s not good but i wanted to share

Re: MAA mujh ko kisi ki nazar lagay hey

Ghazel, its a very good try. Keep it up dear. :k:

Re: MAA mujh ko kisi ki nazar lagay hey

thanks to like it first and last

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:(

Re: MAA mujh ko kisi ki nazar lagay hey

Ghazal r u male?

aur waisay bhi MAA k zikar kaheen bhi ho wo khudh hi say acha lagta hay
nice try btw

Re: MAA mujh ko kisi ki nazar lagay hey

VRY NICE GHAZAL JI.....

kawish achi hai,,,,

Re: MAA mujh ko kisi ki nazar lagay hey

thanks all

koi dost ko nahe achi lagi i think
:(?