lufz lahraiN lay gayeN taab be-basi achi lagi

NikamiJano · January 6, 2003, 10:37pm

ye sulagta dil ye dil ki be-kali achi lagi
aj barsooN baad muj ko zindghi achi lagi

unglioN se naam likha jo geeli rait peR
lufz lahraiN lay gayeN taab be-basi achi lagi

titliaN thei hath maiN aur paa’ooN lambi ghaas peR
bachpanaY ki ye adaa ye kam-sini achi lagi

sakhta khud sakhta gham day gayeN haiN ulfataiN
jis ko dil ne chaha us ki be-rukhi achi lagi

kuch kashish asi na thei jo dil ko baham joRti
muj ko teRi tuj ko meRi bus shaa’eri achi lagi

Rameesha · January 6, 2003, 10:51pm

Re: lufz lahraiN lay gayeN taab be-basi achi lagi

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

ye sulagta dil ye dil ki be-kali achi lagi
aj barsooN baad muj ko zindghi achi lagi
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is ka matlab he aainda bhi achhi lagney ki umeed he ;)

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kuch kashish asi na thei jo dil ko baham joRti
muj ko teRi tuj ko meRi bus shaa'eri achi lagi
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sach kaha..yoon bhi hota he :(

chand_chehra · January 6, 2003, 10:57pm

very niceeeee :k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 7, 2003, 10:35am

Re: lufz lahraiN lay gayeN taab be-basi achi lagi

mughei toh seb koch he acha laga ap bih

nikii · January 7, 2003, 12:55pm

wowww niammi sisooo zaberdastttttt :k:

arifnawaz1 · January 7, 2003, 1:37pm

**Bahut khoob **:k::k::k:

Amal · January 7, 2003, 6:49pm

Re: lufz lahraiN lay gayeN taab be-basi achi lagi

Bohat khoob NikamiJi:k:…thanx

NikamiJano · January 8, 2003, 12:02am

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*Originally posted by Rameesha: *

is ka matlab he aainda bhi achhi lagney ki umeed he ;)

sach kaha..yoon bhi hota he :(
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umeed per dunya qaim hai ..ha na Rameesha g..:)

NikamiJano · January 8, 2003, 12:03am

thanks

NikamiJano · January 8, 2003, 12:05am

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Really hum be achay lagya mashoom g ap ko …

thanks…:)per kitnay achay lagya…

NikamiJano · January 8, 2003, 12:06am

thanks nikki sis Amal & arifnawaz..:)

Rameesha · January 8, 2003, 12:08am

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
umeed per dunya qaim hai ..ha na Rameesha g..:)
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ah koonsi umeed NJ ... woh jo hum ney apni aankhooN doobti dekhi

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 8, 2003, 4:07am

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the whole ghazal is beautiful:k::k::k:
thanks sis:)

_Masoom_Muskaan · January 8, 2003, 3:24pm

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itnei zeyda kei batana impossible hei

SunnyBoy · January 8, 2003, 4:39pm

Buhat Khoob :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 9, 2003, 10:06am

Re: lufz lahraiN lay gayeN taab be-basi achi lagi

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

ye sulagta dil ye dil ki be-kali achi lagi
aj barsooN baad muj ko zindghi achi lagi

kuch kashish asi na thei jo dil ko baham joRti
muj ko teRi tuj ko meRi bus shaa'eri achi lagi
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Nice one Thanks for sharing NJ sis:)

Capricorn · January 9, 2003, 6:43pm

Nice :k:

NikamiJano · January 10, 2003, 10:45pm

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phir be kuch tu batiey na kitni achi..

NikamiJano · January 10, 2003, 10:46pm

thanks SB,,,cccapo and G_e_tea..:)

aadhoorighazal · January 10, 2003, 11:44pm

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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

unglioN se naam likha jo geeli rait peR
lufz lahraiN lay gayeN taab be-basi achi lagi

bohat hi khoob, nikmai ji, thanks. mujhe aap kae naam par thora sa shikwa sa hai, aap tu itnee kam ki shaeri post kartee hain, phir yeh naam kun ??is kae pusmanzar par rooshni dalna pasand karain gee aap???ghalti ki maafi kae saath, pooch rahee hoon !!!no hard feelings han, !!