Luche Gaane, Luchi Shayari

[madz124]

Re: Luche Gaane, Luchi Shayari

@muqawwee123

right.. but if this line is alone came before you without the background that its from a ghazal, which has been termed as Hamd… then would you consider it in luchi category.

pata nahi. I guess it’s mildly offensive.

this one is more in your face:
main yun miloon tujhe tera libaas ho jaon
bana ke tujhko samundar main pyaas ho jaon

OR

tumhe hum apne jism-o-jaan main kuch aise basa lenge
teri khushboo apne jism ki khushboo bana lenge