[INDENT]Shaam hone se pehlay lot ana,
Kisi k naam honay se pehlay lot ana,
Hum teray intizaar main hain
Anjaan honay se pehlay lot ana,
Subha shaam rehti hay tere dedar ki umeed,
Din khatam honay se pehlay lot ana,
Agar na lot pao to bus itna kar dena
Meri Sans ruknay se pehlay lot ana.
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Bohat khoob nakhan bhai :k: … Thanx a lot for sharing it with us
… and welcome to Poetry forum ![]()
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kia baat hai bhai
achi hai
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good one..
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v nice!
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itni request karain gay tu ..............lot he aaeen gee Madam...........:)
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Nice1 :k:
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really nice specially this one :)
Agar na lot pao to bus itna kar dena
Meri Sans ruknay se pehlay lot ana.
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Excellent Nakhan, too good
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**Amal Ji **pasand karnay ka sukriya… welcome bohat late nahi kia aap nay…
**Deadsoul **bus bhai aap ko pasan aaii thankx
**B-MW **thx a lot
**MerayChaand (moonmine) **bohat shukriya
**Soniaa_Jee **shaayad aa he jain… ![]()
**Insha_ji **pasand karnay ka sukriya ji
**Shab-e-Hijar **![]()
**pk786 **i like this too… ![]()
**Man de Mouj **thankooooooooo:bb:
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good