look

please look for yourself
so that you can look forward…
look for us & look for we, maybe
can you, would you?
look, this is what is care
you claimed you had,
but you don’t

look at all this time that it took, oh the
grounds from below under your feet
that it shook!

no one to hold you, lift you now,
someone could and still would
but first, you’ve to look…

Dushwari

note: sometimes, in poems, something sad or really hurtful enables strength to be truthful. this set of lines is indicative of that simplicity.

Re: look

please look for yourself
so that you can look forward...
look for us & look for we, maybe
can you, would you?
look, this is what is care
you claimed you had,
but you don't

Nice but what did i do wrong if i was looking for my friends and good writers

Re: look

Dilasay,
this is a poem.
thanks!

best,
Dushwari