Look at this! english/urdu...new lyric

I have written this one in english/urdu…

On the first view at it I am excited about the result…
Ok, A Writer should never judge himself…This is a good
Atitude…

Ok, Tell me please how it is

Unfortunately there is no name…If you like you can post suggestions!
Thanks in advance

Ajnabi/Numb - Yet Unknow Title

Piyar Siraf Piyar
I Tried To Give
Piyar Siraf Piyar
I Tried To Tell
Lekin…(Tune)
Tune Na Shukr Kiya

Every Damn Morning
Every Damn Night
Aathi Hai Teri Yaad
Jahaan Bhee Jahoon
Tera Naam Tera Chera
Nahin Bhula Para Tujhai
You Forget Me So Easily
Dil Ka Daard Bardash Na Hoi

Na Hum Jaane Na Tu Jaane
Broken…You Broke My Heart
Played…You Played Me
This Cold Wind, Making Me Numb
Kahan Se Aya Ye Daard-Naak Andeyra
This Painful Darkness, Making Me A Ajnabi

Doop Bhi Ghirgee Mere Ansoon Dekh Ghar
Chand Sitara Bhi Doob Ghea Asman Ke Peeche
Kees Phool Ka Saham Hai Ye
Jo Mujhe Kaanton Ne Diya

Hamare Lambhe Hamari Batein
Koi Nahi Jaane Koi Nahi Samjhe
Aakela Kara Hoon Mein Yaahan
Tumhare Intezaar Mein
You Were My Beloved
I Think I Should Carry On
Lekin Asaan Phir Bhee Nahin
Log Fasle Kum Karte Hai
You Make Them Wider

Aab Judaa Judaa Ho Ke
I Am Dying In My Love
Ansoooooon Jo Aag Se Bhi Sayada
Dil Or Meri Rukh Ko Maardale
What Am I Supposed To Do
Girl, Girl, Girl, This´s So Hard
Tanhaa Tanhaa Jeena Jeena
Tanhaa Tanhaa Marna Marna

Mene Saaphar Kiya Paharon Par
Mene Saaphar Kiya Aaag Par
Only To See You Again
But Somehow My Sleep Broke
My Thougths Were Forgotten
Mere Dil Par Aag Laghee
Kiya Juram Kar Diyaa
Such Weather I Always Passed
Weather Of Tears & Tanhai

Wo Batein Nahi Raheen
Wo Kuch Nahi Thee
In Silence I Try To Forget
I Try Not To Regret
But To Learn And Carry On
Yeh To Piyar Hai They Say

Re: Look at this! english/urdu…new lyric

Boht Nice :flower1: :halo:

Re: Look at this! english/urdu...new lyric

I´d be really greatful to you all, if you could give me more comments!

Re: Look at this! english/urdu…new lyric

Its Buhut Acha hay… and.. You can make it mazeed acha if You Read More URDU poetry.. tou U will have Idea ke how the Urdu Shair Go around… :slight_smile:

BUT.. its.. Very Achi Effort… Keep it UP :k: