logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"
is lie order per main ne sweater banwaya hai
Thand lage gi to shawl orh lein ge
nahi to chai main sar dibo de ge
moonh say bhaap niklay gi garam pani ki tarha
*bin jalaye,cigrette say dhooan phoonk dein ge *
din chote aur raat lambi ho jae gi
chahein ge bhi to humein neend na aae gi
uth kar chai bana ke pene ka sochein ge
magar kabal say nikalnay ki himat na aae gi
by AQ ki chamchi:layd:
AQ
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Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"

you make me proud 
Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"
hum sab ne mil kar aap ki poetry ka janaza nikal diya
Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"
Anwar bahiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!
Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"

Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"
sara din bethain rahin gay tv kay samnay
cell par sms ka record bhi thor dain ge
karay ga ab jo tu cricket ki baat
isse ballay say tera sar phor dain ge
main bhi soch rahee hoon AQ ki chamchi ban jaoon…kay itna acha likhna aa jayay…keep it up…thanks for sharing…
Azad
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Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"
:)
P_G
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Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"
is main CHAMCHI ka zikkr-e-khair kion nahi is dafa : P
Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"
:D
lolx.. gr8 work chamchi ji.. :)
Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"
Thanks for admiring:)

aur Chamchi bhi aaisi bano ke doosroon ke liye inspiration ho:wink:

Main ne socha ke kahin log chamchi ke kissay sun sun kar
ukta na jain:layd:
Thanks:blush:
Krypton
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Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"
good poem, AQ ki Chemchi.
but if you can, sweater's pattern, please & kon si patee use karee?
best,
Dushwari
Re: logon ko kehtay suna"December lout aaya hai"
Main ne order par banvaya tha is liye kuch idea nahi hai
thanks for liking my poen:blush: