Log TuuT jaate hai.n ek ghar banaane me.n

nikii · January 2, 2003, 1:52pm

** Log TuuT jaate hai.n ek ghar banaane me.n Tum taras nahii.n khaate bastiyaa.N jalaane me.n

Aur jaam TuuTe.nge is sharaab-Khaane me.n
Mausamo.n ke aane me.n mausamo.n ke jaane me.n

Har dha.Dakate patthar ko log dil samajhate hai.n
Umr biit jaatii hai dil ko dil banaane me.n

FaaKhtaa kii majabuurii ye bhii kah nahii.n sakatii
Kaun saa.Np rakhataa hai usake aashiyaane me.n

Duusarii ko_ii la.Dakii zindagii me.n aayegii
Kitanii der lagatii hai usako bhuul jaane me.n **

Dilsay · January 2, 2003, 2:18pm

Very nice

arifnawaz1 · January 2, 2003, 2:53pm

Re: Log TuuT jaate hai.n ek ghar banaane me.n

:k::k::k:
Xcellent and thanks for sharing

SunnyBoy · January 2, 2003, 3:06pm

Buhat Khoob :k:

Amal · January 2, 2003, 4:26pm

Re: Log TuuT jaate hai.n ek ghar banaane me.n

Beautiful:k::)…thanx for sharing nikii

Mean or realistic?

guybrush · January 2, 2003, 4:34pm

very nice :k:

Rameesha · January 2, 2003, 6:32pm

Re: Log TuuT jaate hai.n ek ghar banaane me.n

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by nikii: *

**Har dha.Dakate patthar ko log dil samajhate hai.n
Umr biit jaatii hai dil ko dil banaane me.n
*
[/QUOTE]

mera behad pasandeeda shair ..... pehla shair bhi buhat achha he... thanks for sharing nikii sis :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · January 2, 2003, 6:38pm

Very Nice nikii :~)

system · January 2, 2003, 6:40pm

beautiful :k: :k:

PS: nikki tum ko bhi poetry ka shouq hai?? mujhe nahi maloom tha..

nikii · January 2, 2003, 11:33pm

Re: Re: Log TuuT jaate hai.n ek ghar banaane me.n

thxs amal ji

realistic bhi aur mean bhi
wasay yeh bhi sahi ha ager realistic ha tu socha na kay dosri aye gi zaror likan aye gi tab pehli bhool jaye gi tu mean
app nay confuse kardia mughay bhi

nikii · January 2, 2003, 11:34pm

Re: Re: Log TuuT jaate hai.n ek ghar banaane me.n

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Rameesha: *

mera behad pasandeeda shair ..... pehla shair bhi buhat achha he... thanks for sharing nikii sis :)
[/QUOTE]

:) thxs n u r welcome ramesha :)

nikii · January 2, 2003, 11:37pm

tumhein nahi maloom tha
harat ha

nikii · January 2, 2003, 11:40pm

thxs dilsay , guybrush , arif nawaz and gul siso

chand_chehra · January 3, 2003, 12:39am

very nice nikkoooo :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 3, 2003, 4:56am

Re: Log TuuT jaate hai.n ek ghar banaane me.n

excellent:k::k::k:
thanks