log tuj ko gunguna'eN meri khawaishooN ki tarha

Sahiba · January 19, 2002, 6:35pm

*naam lay lay ka na meRa shahaR ki nazrooN maiN Aa muj se milna hai tu meRay dil k sahra'ooN maiN Aa

is safaR maiN dekh ghul jata hai mitti ka badaN
muj se milnaY ki na khawaish kaR na barsatoN main Aa

log tuj ko gungunaieN meRi khawaishoN ki tarha
ik achhoteY shaeR ki surat meRi gazlooN maiN Aa

be-hunaR logo ne manga phiR meray fun ka saboot
Aa meRi sucha’ee ki khushboo meRay lufzooN maiN Aa
*

~galat nahi k zamanaY maiN lajwab haiN hum
jisay samaj na sakaY koi wo ek kitab haiN hum~

Amal · January 19, 2002, 6:39pm

Bohat khoob ******** ji **

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

Sahiba · January 19, 2002, 6:42pm

hmmmmm thanks sahiba ko *********

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keoN

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~galat nahi k zamanaY maiN lajwab haiN hum
jisay samaj na sakaY koi wo ek kitab haiN hum~

chand_chehra · January 19, 2002, 6:59pm

very nice

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sahibaaaaa ge

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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~

Shaam-e-Firaq · January 20, 2002, 6:59pm

bery bery bery Nice

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kahan peh anay ko kaha hay appnay

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“Dream as if u live forever live as if u will die today”

Capricorn · January 20, 2002, 7:43pm

Wah jee..kia baat hai? apne dil k shahar ka address bhee to dein na usay?

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Akif_zeb_1 · January 20, 2002, 9:12pm

very nice but it more feels like a song then a poem is it … any way bohat khoob…aur hanie kay words main boht ghoob…

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mairay dill mairay mussafir

meijitheonlyone · January 23, 2002, 2:10am

Hmmmmmmmmm buhat he nice…

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Woh Na Aian Too Khalish See Satati Hai Dil Koo
Woh Joo Aa Jain Too Khalish Oor Jawan Hoti Hai?

meiji

Sahiba · January 23, 2002, 2:41am

thanks chand_chahra je

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~galat nahi k zamanaY maiN lajwab haiN hum
jisay samaj na sakaY koi wo ek kitab haiN hum~

Sahiba · January 23, 2002, 2:46am

hmmmmm ana hai tu bata daiti

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warna nahi
anyways thanks

~galat nahi k zamanaY maiN lajwab haiN hum
jisay samaj na sakaY koi wo ek kitab haiN hum~

Sahiba · January 23, 2002, 2:55am

thanks chachO

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~galat nahi k zamanaY maiN lajwab haiN hum
jisay samaj na sakaY koi wo ek kitab haiN hum~

Pramod · January 23, 2002, 5:47am

[quote]
Originally posted by Sahiba:
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log tuj ko gungunaieN meRi khawaishoN ki tarha
ik achhoteY shaeR ki surat meRi gazlooN maiN Aa

be-hunaR logo ne manga phiR meray fun ka saboot
Aa meRi sucha'ee ki khushboo meRay lufzooN maiN Aa
*

**
[/quote]

Bahut khoob...Sahiba ji...it is really nice..

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

Capricorn · January 23, 2002, 8:15pm

Aap kahein aur hum na aaein
Aise to halaat naheen

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