Log Marna he chorr dey...!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Usse keh do Ghalib Hamari Taqdeer Say Jalna choor dey
**Ham tau wO Bad Naseeb hay jo KaFan ki dukan khule tau log marna he chor dy…! **

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Re: Log Marna he chorr dey...!

*Kahamush Kia aap nay Saheeh Sha'r likha hay ?????? Kuch baat banti nazar naheen aa rahi hay ...... *

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Re: Log Marna he chorr dey...!

Sannan......!

Aaj Kiss Baat Par Gussa Aaya ??????
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Re: Log Marna he chorr dey...!

she'r ke awzan kuch khata nahi ho gaye??balke yoon kahiye ke waqai khata ho gaye hain...koi gal nahi khamush

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wah beautiful:k:

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Re: Log Marna he chorr dey...!

**@ Saqinaji **you are absolutely right ...

*@Shab-e-Hijar *, kam uz kum aap say yah umeed naheen thi kah She'r parhay baghair dad day dain .......

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Re: Log Marna he chorr dey...!

the shair is not correct..
Wazan bilkul hi out hai..

btw we didn't expect reply without reading the shair from mod..

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Re: Log Marna he chorr dey...!

Ohh je Mujh say buhot bari galtee ho gai jo yaha aa ke shair Pots ki ...
so sorryyyyyyyyyyyyy.....
Take care
Allah Hafiz

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Re: Log Marna he chorr dey...!

*Nahin yaar bura mat manou leekan do teen ashaar ko to nah milao ... naraaz hona buri baat hay *

~~~Missing Someone~~~