likha jo maiN ne safha'ey dil peR jamal-e-gham

NikamiJano · October 23, 2002, 9:34pm

maiN ne jo rang-e-rasam tamana badal dya
us ne be dil dahee ka wateeRa badal dya

maiN ne buuni jo aik fazaye namood-e-ishq
us ne nazaR haataa k tamaasha badal dya

badla jo maiN ne zave’aa inthaa’ey shooq
us ne be maRkaz rukh-e-zaiba badal dya

rakha jo maiN ne hijR maiN be quRab ka sarooR
us ne qaRaar-e-jaa’N ka kreeNa badal dya

chahi jo maiN ne wajad-e-talab maiN sapurdghi
us ne nizaam-e-vasal he saaRaa badal dya

likha jo maiN ne safha’ey dil peR jamal-e-gham
us ne waaRaq ulaat k madaawa badal dya:teary3:

dala jo maiN ne sheR maiN ik sanvi khayal
chupkaY se us ne misrah-e-…badal dya

chand_chehra · October 24, 2002, 4:06am

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Lamhay · October 24, 2002, 5:54am

bahut khoob nikami

SunnyBoy · October 24, 2002, 6:31am

Zabar10 :k:

NikamiJano · October 24, 2002, 8:44am

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NikamiJano · October 24, 2002, 8:45am

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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
bahut khoob nikami
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thanks...:) lamhay g & SB

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 24, 2002, 10:27am

Re: likha jo maiN ne safha’ey dil peR jamal-e-gham

Very Nice NJ sis , bit different Poetry , but i like it very much, Thanks for sharing

Jaan_Lewaa · October 24, 2002, 4:50pm

Re: likha jo maiN ne safha’ey dil peR jamal-e-gham

bhut achay:k:

Capricorn · October 24, 2002, 5:47pm

To aur woh kare bhee kia?
Its a beautiful ghazal Nikiiiiii…beautiful indeeed:)

nikii · October 24, 2002, 8:24pm

bhut khoob nikami siso :k:

chand_chehra · October 24, 2002, 9:15pm

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Jaan_Lewaa · October 25, 2002, 12:25am

niki:confused:
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NJ post thiz

Amal · October 25, 2002, 10:33am

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nice one NikamiJik:

Capricorn · October 25, 2002, 11:02am

I know:) But its meree marzee ke mein NJ ko nikii kahoon ya kuch aur, should I get your permission kia?

Capricorn · October 25, 2002, 11:05am

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She meant :love: for you dont get

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 25, 2002, 11:19am

Eastern_Thoughts · October 25, 2002, 2:00pm

Bahut Khoob NJ
thori Sad hay but as usual Nice Choice..... pata nahi from where u search Master Pieces of Poets :)

NikamiJano · October 25, 2002, 6:39pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts: *
Bahut Khoob NJ
thori Sad hay but as usual Nice Choice..... pata nahi from where u search Master Pieces of Poets :)
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oh tu ap jaag gaye Amjad bahi..thanks any ways......keep smiling..:)

NikamiJano · October 25, 2002, 6:41pm

Mashoom g ap keon

thanks Amal…

Jaan_Lewaa · October 25, 2002, 7:12pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

I know:) But its meree marzee ke mein NJ ko nikii kahoon ya kuch aur, should I get your permission kia? :)
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i waz little confused datz y i asked dat:)