let's share rubaa'iiyaat [quatrains]

salaam dosto,
how are you?

this discipline of poetry is rare now. at one tine, it used to be a part of Ghazal goii. poets would read a rubaa’ii [quatrain] before reading the Ghazal.

a rubaa’ii is a 4 liner…more like a qit’a…with three misr’as having qawaafii while the third misr’a is devoid of the qaafiya. the difference between a qit’a and a rubaa’ii is that rubaa’ii is said in a particular bahr and vazan while qit’a can be in any bahr and vazan. also, qit’a has a particular theme, dealing with mysteries of life on this planet earth and the life here after.’

let’s get going…lemme share one of the rubaa’iis of my Dad:
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sun mujh se nahiiN k hai jahaan-e-guzaraaN
tadbeer na taqdeer kii ta’beer, yahaaN
haiN maut o Hayaat Khowaab donoN, lekin
yeh Khowaab-e-parishaan hai na vo Khowaab-e-garaaN**

faqat Khaak-e-paa,
_______KKF

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Rubai ke mashoor shoara ka naam bhi bata den, taake logon ko search karne main aasani rahe :)

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ooper wali (2 & 3 ) na to rubai hai na qita… :hmmm:

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yuN ba-zaahir to maiN nahiiN bataa saktaa k yeh kia hai…qawaafii ko madd-e-nazar rakhte huye, Jaun Eliya waalii to rubaa’ii lagtii hai jab k Akhtar saaHab waalaa qit’a…
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ek pahchaan to yeh hai k qit’a muzakkar hai aur rubaa’ii muannas!** :cb:

rubaa’iiyaat search kar leN…sabhii ustaad sho’araa ne rubaa’iyaat kahii haiN.

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sookhaa huaa pattaa jou giraa daali sey
ik parda uthaa zeest ki paamaali sey
chaa jaati hai jis waqt baaharoun pey khizaan
roney ki sadaa aati hey hariyaali sey

(Qateel shifai)

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:omg: I didn’t know ke santa banta bhi shayri ka zoq rakhte hain


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:lajawab:

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ab maiN Khud confused ho gayaa huN k qit'a kia hai aur rubaa'ii kia hai...lol

nice sharings so far though!

Muqwee, Santa Banta meraa hii site hai...;)

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ji ji.. unke kuch jokes padh kar aapki posts yaad aati hain life1 main ;)

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i found this regarding qit'a and rubaa'ii:

Qita. It is an Arabic word and means part, section. According to structure qita looks like ghazal. But qita has more socio-political, moral and educational content. Works of G. Burhaneddin, İ. Nasimi, M. Fuzuli, etc. are in this genre.

Rubai. It is poem genre in total, consisting of four hemistiches and having more social, philosophical content. Ruba is written in hajaz bahr of aruz rhythm. When we say rubai, as a rule, we recall the great eastern classic poet Omar Khayyam (X century).

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hai na? sab se alag hotii hai...log seriouslyy do do page ke jawaab likhtye haiN jis maiN one-liner banaa ke mazaaHiya andaaz meN pesh kar detaa huN!

hai na baa-kamaal logoN kii baa-kamaal service? ;)

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:d6c: bakamaal log , lajawab service.

chalen ab pesh karen Rubai Akhtari bai Allahbadi wali ki tarah :slight_smile:

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mere vaalid e marHoom kii ek aur rubaa'ii:

*fitrat hii ne sahbaa tujhe baKhshii hai nigeh
fitrat hii ne mastii meN kaha tujh se k kah
har cheez hai jab Khud hii bar-afganda niqaab
go "maa kashaf Allah fa laa mamsak ileh"!
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jaldi post karungi :hypo:

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jawaanoun kou meri aah-e-sahar dey
phir in shaheen bachchoun ko baal-o-par dey
khudaya! aarzoo meri yehi hai
mera noor-e-baseerat aam kar dey

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vaalid marHoom kii ek aur rubaa'ii pesh-e-Khidmat hai:
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mai hogii, na terii raah meN nai hogii
zaahid, terii zindagii jo thii, hai, hogii
is zohd o tashaKhKhus pe Khuda raHm kare
yeh raah-e-hazaar_saalah kab tai hogii
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nai = baaNsurii/flute
tashaKhKhus = mumtaaz hastii/munfarid hastii/unique personality
zohd = taqwa/piety