Lets play poetry !

sub poetry mein hi baat kerein gay bus :smiley:

so me start here!

Adab sub meri taraf say
aye kertay hein bazam
sher per kehyie sher
dekaoo sub hy kitna dum

:rolleyes: Hey! its mine sher.. but look like stupid sa.. kehir.. so .. who’s next.. i will be better sheria with time..:blush:

Re: Lets play poetry !

hum shair naheen
bus dewanay hain

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wow ! :claps:

dewanaoon kay acha bahnay hein
ye kub bi aur in kay sher bi puranay hei .. ADAB! :blush:

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good shair ..not bad..wah g wah

gham-e-duniya bhi gham-e-yar mein shamil ker lo
nasha barhta hey sharabein jo sharbooN mein milein

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uh oh, wait till phatima comes in here :eek:

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is that a threat ?

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log asay bi din betatay hein
jo bi ghum ho isay chupatay hein
koi shikwa gila nahi kertay
zher kah ker bi muskertay hein
kon janay asa kyon hota hy
haan magar dil holay holay rota hy :frowning:

oh its look like mein sheria bun rahi hon :eek:

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U mean in poetry section :smack:

Phatiiiii na .. :rolleyes: .. kuch na kerna ..

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Dil ke armaan ansoon main beh gaye
Unke bachay humain mamoon keh gaye :bummer:

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ouch!!

toor dia dil hamara
masoom say shair aur wafa daar dewane thay hum
kyoun sataya mujhay jalimoon
kia zindagi main kum thay ghum

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:rotfl:

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hey! log sher kud say baannoo like me.. :snooty: gana nahi..

masoom si nazar masoom sa seher
bus kuch asa hi ahsaas ho tum :rolleyes:

i am getting … :digust: anyway..

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good ones DF

in barishooN se dosti achi nahi faraz
kacha tera makan hey kuch to khiyal ker
diwar kia giri meray kachay makan ki
Logo ne meray sahan se rasta bana liya

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Thanks :blush: or i should say.. hmm .. haan .. nawazish

diwar ka pather tou na tha mein
pher kyon but sa buna behta hon
kuch hilchul bi nahi meray dil mein
ankhoon ki nudyaan bahye betha hon

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Raat bhar usko, mein sunata raha apna dewaaan
tab kahein ja ker meray ghar se woh mehmaN nikla

:hehe:

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It's not by me, but I think it's beautiful. :)

Ek woh uski awaaz yaad aayegi,
uski kahi hui har baat yaad aayegi,
din dhal jayega raat yaad ayegi,
kabhi haste, kabhi rote, kabhi muskurate,
yeh zindagi uske bin kat jayegi.
Par kuch kami isme bhi reh jayegi dil ko tadpayegi,
kabhi tarsayagi harr lamhe me uski yaad aayegi..

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:hehe: dewaan ki copy mujhe milay gi? :smiley:

khatam hi nahi hoti kabi woh tere aik dastaan
qalam tou kab hein meray haathon say chotay hovay

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lol DF
herez one of my favorites..its witty
hum dum ki qasam
hum dum ke liyeee
hum dum se gayee
hum dum na milaaa

zakham itney sahay
marham ke liyee
mar ham bhi gaye
marham na mila

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ya muhabat bhe kia roog hey faraz
jis ko bholay woh sada yad aya

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kouN kehta hai kay mout aye gi aur mai mar jaouN gi
mai tou LARKI houN saraay larkouN kay uper say guzr jaouN gi :D