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lemme show what i mean by refining. read the quoted text [in green fonts] and then the following refined version [in blue]. look for words and phrases that have been changed to make it better:**
**abhi chand ek aiyaam kii baat hai k mere aHbaab meN se ek apnii hamsheera ke hamraah kisi mele men jaane ke liye kamar basta baiThe the. ittefaaqan, rail gaaRii do ghanTe taaKheer se aanewaali thii lihaazaa ham ne socfhaa k kiuN na ham station jaate huye raah meN qayaam kar ke ice cream kaa zaaiqa le leN taa k waqt guzaarii bhii ho jaaye aur zabaan bhii lazeez swaad se aashnaa ho jaaye. is taraH, ham sab rickshoN meN lad-phand ke markazii abazaar gaye jahaN ham sab ne lazeez tareen ice cream khaayii, kuchh Khareed o faroKht kiyaa phir station par aamad hote hii rail gaaRii pahoNch chukii thii. 
btw, abhii is iqtibaas [text] meN bahoooooot behtarii kii gunjaaish hai…so, koshish jaarii reakkheN :)**