This is a shair i wrote recently.
Leo - Mere Marne Ke Baad
Download MP3: http://www.mediafire.com/?iijnbznnjw5
Mere marne ke baad
Meri kabur per mera naam na likhna
Naam mein kia hai
Likhna hai to mere pyar ki dastan likhna
Pyar bhari zindagi mein mushkilat nahi
Yeh to hai sabse asaan likhna
Pyar mein budha kon hota hai
Is mein to rehte hai sab javaan likhna
Mohabbat ka safar kabhi nahi rukta
Yeh to hai ik musalsal carvaan likhna
Pyar mein bewaffai kerna
Astaghfirulah hai yeh sabse bhara gunah likhna
Mohabbat kerte hai sabhi
Maghar nibhana hai ik imtehaan likhna
Tha to yeh aik aam insaan
Lekin marne ke baad
Isse yaad rakhe ga sara jahaan likhna
Re: Leo - Mere Marne Ke Baad
Nice..I like the way you read it :k:
Re: Leo - Mere Marne Ke Baad
thank you. I fixed the other one. I hope you like that one too
Re: Leo - Mere Marne Ke Baad
So all these songs belong to the new album ur working on?
are u a DJ or a singer/writer..or all 3?
Re: Leo - Mere Marne Ke Baad
Lol yea i have been working on a album for 5 years.
First i learned how to make music
Then came the singing... I have been practicing for a while now
I am veryyy average at it or veryy less than average
So now i am seriously getting into writing.
Re: Leo - Mere Marne Ke Baad
oh okkk 
well…coz I jst wntd to check before I said something crazy…
Well…I like your writing…its good…but ur singing is…hmmm…I have to agree with you on that. Hope u dnt mind me saying that 
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No i agree as well. But from here i will onlyyy get better.
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Best of luck with everything :k:
Re: Leo - Mere Marne Ke Baad
Thank You
Re: Leo - Mere Marne Ke Baad
good stuff..i chkd ur song too..work on it more ull definitely be going somewhere!
Re: Leo - Mere Marne Ke Baad
aw thanks. That is the biggest compliment anyone can give me