Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

P_G November 4, 2012, 7:55pm 1

****Jaaen Gain Door Tak Jo Khayaloun K Silsilay
Khud Un Se Aa Milain Gain Ujaloun K Silsilay

Kuch Es Liye Bhe Ho Gaey Gosha-Nashen Ham
Had Se He Barh Chale Thay Sawaloun K Silsilay

Fursat Nahi K Pursish e Ehwal Kar Sakain
Ham Jaante Hain Bholnay Walon K Silsilay

Rah-E-Wafa Kathin Hai Sambhal Kar Chalo Yahan
Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

Duniya Teray Faraib Main Anay K Ham Nahi
Ham Ne Bohat Parhay Hain Rasaloun K Silsilay

Muddat K Baad Aaey Hain Ghar Ko Jo Lout Kar
Paaey Hain Muntazir Wohi Jaloun K Silsilay

Tay Jab Talak Na Ho Ye Bayaban-E-Zindagi
Pairoun K Saath Saath Hain Chaloun K Silsilay
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enter10 November 4, 2012, 8:01pm 2

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

Nice 1

the_reader November 4, 2012, 8:02pm 3

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

nice...

wabasta teri hayaat say sabhi silsilay hain magar!

P_G November 4, 2012, 8:22pm 4

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

adaab arz hai

the reader > yeh app nay kia shaair ki ghazal ka jawab likha hay ?

the_reader November 4, 2012, 8:25pm 5

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

silsilay say silsila milanay ki neem jaan si koshish ki thi, doosra misra yaad nahi aya

P_G November 4, 2012, 8:28pm 6

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

isee ley silsila apnee mout ap mer gya : P

the_reader November 4, 2012, 8:31pm 7

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

kisi kay marnay par bhi koi zaban nikalta hay?

P_G November 4, 2012, 8:33pm 8

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

silsila kissi lerki ka nam to nahi rolleyes

the_reader November 4, 2012, 8:38pm 9

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

silsila hota hay hoti nahi hay not-rolling-eyes

lets not ruin this nice poetry now : ) very nice share

P_G November 4, 2012, 8:41pm 10

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

muahazab lafzoon main app mujhay shut up ferma rahay hain hoonh

the_reader November 4, 2012, 8:44pm 11

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

aap baray honay kay sath sath zaheen bhi hoti ja rahi hain! wow a rare incident : p

P_G November 4, 2012, 8:46pm 12

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stop flooding snooty

the_reader November 4, 2012, 8:49pm 13

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

mainay to phir bhi dabay dabay mohazzab lafzoon main kaha tha...

baray be aabroo ho kar teray koochay say hum niklay teary

LP November 5, 2012, 1:30am 14

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

:k:

ajazali November 5, 2012, 7:46am 15

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

another angle…

it takes a second to say hello but forever to say goodbye

ehsan November 5, 2012, 7:51am 16

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

Nice. :k:

LP November 5, 2012, 3:04pm 17

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

:k:

P_G November 5, 2012, 4:29pm 18

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

^ app nay do dafa reply ker diya .. bus isee khushee main yeh nazam app ki hoyee : P

tarash November 5, 2012, 4:35pm 19

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kya yeh nazam for sale thi?

muqawwee123 November 5, 2012, 4:35pm 20

Re: Lamhon Main Toot Jate Hain Saloun K Silsilay

****Muddat K Baad Aaey Hain Ghar Ko Jo Lout Kar
Paaey Hain Muntazir Wohi Jaloun K Silsilay

wo ghar lota tha ya qomi assembli main?