LamhoN kay azaab seh rahaa hooN

WiseGuy · April 8, 2003, 4:49pm

LamhoN kay azaab seh rahaa hooN MaiN apanay wajood kee sazaa hooN

ZaKhmon kay gulaab khil rahay haiN
Khushboo kay hujoom maiN khaRaa hooN

Is dasht-e-talab maiN ek maiN bhee
SadiyoN kee thakee hui sadaa hooN

Benaam-o-numood zindagi kaa
Ek bojh uThaaye phir rahaa hooN

Ek aisaa chaman hai jis kee Khushboo
SaaNson maiN basaaye phir rahaa hooN

Ek aisee zameeN hai jis ko CHookar
Taqadees-e-haram say aashna hooN

Ay mujh ko fareb denay valay
MaiN tujh par yaqeen kar chukaa hooN

MaiN teray qareeb aatay aatay
KuCH aur bhee door ho gayaa hooN

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 8, 2003, 7:15pm

achha hua batah dia azab mei kami nehe ho sekte

roz poetry forum peh a ker
logo ko tang ker raha hoon:p

Koyal · April 8, 2003, 8:14pm

Re: LamhoN kay azaab seh rahaa hooN

ha na ap he ki galti hia na ab bhugtoo

mazak a part nice one :k:

chand_chehra · April 8, 2003, 9:40pm

Nice :k:

Swera · April 9, 2003, 3:42am

Re: LamhoN kay azaab seh rahaa hooN

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

MaiN teray qareeb aatay aatay
KuCH aur bhee door ho gayaa hooN
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bohat hoob, thnx 4 sharing :)

WiseGuy · April 9, 2003, 3:50am

thanks!
abhi tu kuch nahee ker raha
bas aap ki baaton per sir dhun raha hoon

Dilsay · April 9, 2003, 5:25am

Very nice... thanks for sharing

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 9, 2003, 12:07pm

ab sir dhun ke kia keroon mei
pehlei he boht bikhra hua hon:p

Azad · April 9, 2003, 12:18pm

ZaKhmon kay gulaab khil rahay haiN
Khushboo kay hujoom maiN khaRaa hooN

Lajwaab :k:

thanks for sharing

WiseGuy · April 9, 2003, 12:33pm

Re: Re: LamhoN kay azaab seh rahaa hooN

Bhugat hee tu raha hoon main

Thanks for liking

WiseGuy · April 9, 2003, 12:34pm

Thanks Chando ji

WiseGuy · April 9, 2003, 12:35pm

Re: Re: LamhoN kay azaab seh rahaa hooN

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*Originally posted by Swera: *

bohat hoob, thnx 4 sharing :)
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You are welcome, Thanks for liking :)

WiseGuy · April 9, 2003, 12:35pm

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Very nice... thanks for sharing
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Shukriya Dilsay :)

Azad · April 9, 2003, 12:41pm

Na to humaray hissay ka shukria kahan gia???

WiseGuy · April 9, 2003, 12:43pm

Bikher bhi gaya tu kia mera tu hai too
MaiN teray Intezaar main tehra hua hon

WiseGuy · April 9, 2003, 12:44pm

Thanks Azad

WiseGuy · April 9, 2003, 12:45pm

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*Originally posted by Azad: *
Na to humaray hissay ka shukria kahan gia???
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THANKSSSSSSSS :)

Azad · April 9, 2003, 12:46pm

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

THANKSSSSSSSS :)
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good

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 10, 2003, 10:03am

intazar sei koch nehe hasil honei wala
jantei hue bih khud ko dhoka dei raha hoon:p:hehe:

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 10, 2003, 10:29am

boht khob :p