Lakh chaha us ko bhool jaoun per.....

EEMAAN · January 5, 2007, 9:30pm

Aaj tak qaiym hay us k laut aanay ki umeed
Aaj tak theri huwi hay zindagi apni jagah
Lakh yeh chaha keh us ko bhool jaoun per Qateel
Hoslay apni jagah hain beybasi apni jagah

sunny_nicky · January 5, 2007, 9:39pm

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niceee

NikamiJano · January 6, 2007, 2:20am

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nice one :)

SunnyBoy · January 6, 2007, 3:06am

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:k:

MARRIED_NY · January 6, 2007, 3:32am

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WOW beautiful

Kaka_MaNNa · January 6, 2007, 5:10am

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Aaj tak qaiym hay us k laut aanay ki umeed
Aaj tak theri huwi hay zindagi apni jagah
Lakh yeh chaha hay keh us ko bhool jaoun per Qateel
Hoslay apni jagah hain beybasi apni jagah

wah wah, ye to ap nain parh lia, agay parain...

dortey ho merey badun main tum khoon ki tarah
Mil jao tou pujun paani samajh ke pyasey ki tarah

chaley ghay ho hum se tum door eid ke chaand ki tarah
Aya na koe humain phir pasand tumahri tarah

aye thay tum khaab main meri udaas badal ki tarah
soocha pooch loon tumara haal email se zarah

karey ga na koe raj merey dil par teri tarah
dorte ho merey badun main tum khoon ki tarah

...this could go on for sometime but I think I should just stop there.

fghd · January 6, 2007, 6:22am

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bohut khoob :k:

kaleemhk · January 6, 2007, 6:56am

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very nice........:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 6, 2007, 10:22am

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Boht khoob ... :)

aabla_pa · January 6, 2007, 10:57am

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Its nice. But is this a poetry of QATEEL. Or is it FARAZ... !

LAAKH YE CHAAHA K USKO BHOOL JAOON PAR FARAZ
HOSLAY APNI JAGA HEIN, BEBASI APNI JAGA

EEMAAN · January 6, 2007, 3:05pm

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Thanks all..

EEMAAN · January 6, 2007, 3:08pm

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Mai nay jahan say parha wahan Qateel k naam k saath hi tha,,kisi book mein parha tha,,so I am not sure,,,,but I ll try to search it on net than will confirm,,,Thanks..

Jhuki_Nigahein · January 6, 2007, 3:49pm

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Hoslay apni jagah hain beybasi apni jagah

buhat khoob :)

EEMAAN · January 7, 2007, 6:38pm

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Thanks :-)

sad_affect · January 13, 2007, 2:38pm

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Aaj tak qaiym hay us k laut aanay ki umeed
Aaj tak theri huwi hay zindagi apni jagah
Lakh yeh chaha keh us ko bhool jaoun per Qateel
"Hoslay apni jagah hain beybasi apni jagah"
Its just Superb

Muslim_girl_1 · January 14, 2007, 12:10am

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i would say EXCELLENT!
:k:

nakhan · January 15, 2007, 8:48am

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Zabardast...

pk786 · January 15, 2007, 11:17am

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ver nice :)

Cute-Cinderella · January 15, 2007, 11:28am

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So Nice EMAAN :) this sher i wana dedicate to u .....

kia kahiN kesay basaR hijaR ki raa'taiN ki haiN -
umeR bhaR chand se ik shakas ki bataiN ki haiN =-

Regard's
Rida Ali

EEMAAN · January 16, 2007, 4:07pm

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Thanksssssssssss all,,,and very nice shair Rida Ali :-)..