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Rude Boyz Rulez
aap yeh Matlaa ,Sher Nomber 2 aur 4 ko darust kar leiN yahaN matl’aa gHalat hai aur 4 nomber Sher meiN ho nahiN sakta keh Bahadur Shah Zaffar jaissi Hasti Wazan se giraa huwa sher kahe " Yeh bhi GuloN saath pale haiN bahaar meiN" Ghalat hai Sahi maiN ne neeche likh diya hai Note kar lijye ga:-
**lagtaa nahiN hai Jee meraa ujrhe dayaar meiN
kiski bani hai Aalam-e-naa’paayedaar meiN
Kaih do in HasratoN se kahiN aur jaa baseiN
Itni Jagah kahaaN hai dil-e-daagHadaar meiN
Umr-e-daraaz maaNg kar laaye the chaar din
do arzuu meiN kaT gaye do Intezaar meiN
KaanToN ko mat nikaal Chaman se keh baagHbaaN
Yeh bhi GuloN ke saath pale haiN bahaar meiN
Kitnaa hai badnaseeb ‘Zafar’ dafn ke liye
do gaz zameen bhee na mili Kuu-e-yaar meiN **
PS:- Urdupoint se koi bhi Ghazal ya Nazm parheiN to uski tehqeeq kar ke aapni dairy mein note kijye gaa. aksar-o-beshtar wahaaN ghalatiyaaN hoti haiN
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**Aye Shor e Qayaamat ham sote hee na reh jaa’yeN
is Raah se guzre to ham ko bhee jagaa jaanaa
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[This message has been edited by Tassneef (edited July 05, 2002).]
Ok ... Thx Dear
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Rude Boyz Rulez
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Never Stop Smiling Even When U R Sad Someone Might Fall In “LoVe” With Ur Smile
Thankoo SM
heheheheh … Thx.
and by the way .. i am now SB not SM
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Rude Boyz Rulez
ok SK thekh hai ya SPM
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SB to lagta hai jaese State Bank :~