lafzoN main dard e hijr ko mehsoos ker kay daikh

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal July 17, 2007, 3:23am 1

**wo shakhs ****mujh ko jeet k hara hai aur bus** **itna he zindagi ka khasara hai aur bus**

kesay kahooN k us ka irada badal gaya
such to yehi hai us nay pukara hai aur bus

duni’ya ko is main dard ki shiddat kahan milay
aankhoN say aik toot’ta hua tara hai aur bus

lafzoN main dard e hijr ko mehsoos ker kay daikh
kehnay ko main nay waqt guzara hai aur bus

ab in maiN koi khwab sajanay nahiN mujhay
ankhoN ko intazar tumhara hai aur bus

maiN nay kaha k khwab maiN dekhi hain barishain
us nay kaha k aik isharaa hai aur bus

deep_ocean July 17, 2007, 3:58am 2

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awesome

muddii July 17, 2007, 4:11am 3

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Splended choice Koyal:)

Amal July 17, 2007, 2:50pm 4

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Kya baat hey Koyal :k: Bohat hi acchi ghazal hey. Thanx for sharing with us

Shab-e-Hijar July 17, 2007, 6:04pm 5

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wah g very hi nice :k:

Do you prefer to eat karhi with roti or rice?

m.a.d.i.h.a July 17, 2007, 7:17pm 6

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nice

Daanie July 17, 2007, 7:55pm 7

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wonderful sharing :)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh July 17, 2007, 8:24pm 8

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buhat khoob koyal bibi:-)

WiseGuy July 18, 2007, 2:56pm 9

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lafzoN main dard e hijr ko mehsoos ker kay daikh
kehnay ko main nay waqt guzara hai aur bus

Wah jee bohat khoob, thank you for sharing

Koyal July 19, 2007, 4:45am 10

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Koyal July 19, 2007, 4:45am 11

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ur welcome any time ;)

SJ July 19, 2007, 5:43am 12

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Aatif Saeed is alwayzz amazing :k:
Very nice ghazal
Thanks 4 sharing

Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:01am 13

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thanks sonia

Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:02am 14

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thanks muddi g :)

Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:03am 15

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ap ka saa’ya parta ja raha koyal per b

Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:03am 16

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shukria shaboo:blush:

Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:05am 17

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:) thanks

Ded to Sidra

Ded to Sidra

Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:05am 18

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Koyal July 21, 2007, 3:06am 19

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