lafzoN ki justajuu meiN koi boltaa na thaa

Koyal · August 26, 2003, 2:58am

* pathar sulag rahe the koi naqsh-e-paaa na thaa ham us taraf chale the jidhar raastaa na thaa

parchaa’iyoN k shahar ki tanha’yaaN na puuchh
apnaa shareek-e-Gam koi apane sivaa na thaa

yuuN dekhti hai gum’shuda lamhoN k more se
is zindagii se jaise ko_ii vaastaa na thaa

cheharoN pe jam ga’ee thiN KhayaloN ki ul’jhanhaiN
lafzoN kii justajuu meiN koi boltaa na thaa

khurshiid kyaa ub’harate dil ki tay’hoN se ham
is anjumaN meiN koi **sehar **aashanaa na thaa
*

_Passionate · August 26, 2003, 3:13am

nice one koyal ji :k:

AQ · August 26, 2003, 5:27am

Re: lafzoN ki justajuu meiN koi boltaa na thaa

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

*

parchaa'iyoN k shahar ki tanha'yaaN na puuchh
apnaa shareek-e-Gam koi apane sivaa na thaa

yuuN dekhti hai gum'shuda lamhoN k more se
is zindagii se jaise ko_ii vaastaa na thaa

*

[/QUOTE]
:)

Azad · August 26, 2003, 5:34am

humm

chand_chehra · August 26, 2003, 6:26am

woww very nice :k:
keep it up

chodhry · August 26, 2003, 6:45am

Re: lafzoN ki justajuu meiN koi boltaa na thaa

:k: bohat ala koyal jee

cuteepie · August 26, 2003, 7:13am

:k:

K_Khan · August 26, 2003, 9:59am

:k: Buhat Achai Koyal G

Capricorn · August 26, 2003, 10:39am

Re: lafzoN ki justajuu meiN koi boltaa na thaa

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

*
pathar sulag rahe the koi naqsh-e-paaa na thaa
ham us taraf chale the jidhar raastaa na thaa

Magar kioon?

Daagh · August 26, 2003, 11:33am

Re: lafzoN ki justajuu meiN koi boltaa na thaa

bahot khoob koyal jee nice one

is sher par ek sher yaad aaya …

kaun rotaa hai kisi aur ke gham ki khaatir
sab ko apni hi kisi baat pe ronaa aayaa

Amal · August 26, 2003, 12:17pm

Re: lafzoN ki justajuu meiN koi boltaa na thaa

Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey:k:…thanx for sharing.

WiseGuy · August 26, 2003, 12:32pm

khurshiid kyaa ub'harate dil ki tay'hoN se ham
is anjumaN meiN koi sehar aashanaa na thaa

BOhat khoob...
Yeh poet kon hain jeee ;)

Daagh · August 26, 2003, 9:13pm

yeh ‘sehar’ bold mein kyon

Koyal · August 26, 2003, 10:08pm

cuz wo kafi bold hia na (aray ye mod sehar nahi na) tuba un ki shaan main guztakhi tu nahi na karna ban hona hia kia ?

Koyal · August 26, 2003, 10:11pm

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
khurshiid kyaa ub'harate dil ki tay'hoN se ham
is anjumaN meiN koi **sehar* aashanaa na thaa

BOhat khoob...
Yeh poet kon hain jeee ;)
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neend main poet nahi nazar aia g ;)

Koyal · August 26, 2003, 10:16pm

Re: Re: lafzoN ki justajuu meiN koi boltaa na thaa

Koyal · August 26, 2003, 10:18pm

Re: Re: lafzoN ki justajuu meiN koi boltaa na thaa

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Magar kioon?
[/QUOTE]

har keon ka jawab nahi hota acha..:)

Koyal · August 26, 2003, 10:21pm

ullujii · August 26, 2003, 10:27pm

parchaa’iyoN k shahar ki tanha’yaaN na puuchh
apnaa shareek-e-Gam koi apane sivaa na thaa

nice

Koyal · August 26, 2003, 10:34pm

Re: Re: lafzoN ki justajuu meiN koi boltaa na thaa

ap aur yahan sab kher hia na any way thanks