Koyal
February 19, 2011, 3:46am
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***nazm ulajhi hui hai seene meiN
misaRe aTke hu’ye haiN hoThoN paR
urte phirtey haiN titaliyo’N ki tarha
lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh’tey hi nahiN
kab se baiThaa huuN maiN jaanam
saade kaaGhaz pe likh ke naam teRaa
bas teRaa naam hii mukammal hai
is se bahtaR bhi nazm kyaa hogi***
Amal
February 19, 2011, 4:20am
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Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh’tey hii nahiN
Koyal ji aap ko nazmoN ka shaoq kab sey ho gaya? Achi nazm hey :k: … thanx for sharing
Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh'tey hii nahiN
koyal jaan you need pepto bismol :p
Southie
February 19, 2011, 4:57am
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Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh'tey hii nahiN
Sweet
Koyal
February 19, 2011, 10:49pm
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Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh’tey hii nahiN
jab se wasta pRa ap se
Koyal
February 19, 2011, 10:50pm
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Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh'tey hii nahiN
koyal jaan you need pepto bismol :p
need my addres to send it to me :p
Naabigh
February 20, 2011, 9:39pm
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Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh'tey hii nahiN
Nice poem by Gulzar
Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh'tey hii nahiN
nice
UZ
February 21, 2011, 5:19am
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Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh’tey hii nahiN
***nazm ulajhi hui hai seene meiN
misaRe aTke hu’ye haiN hoThoN paR
urte phirtey haiN titaliyo’N ki tarha
lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh’tey hi nahiN
kab se baiThaa huuN maiN jaanam
saade kaaGhaz pe likh ke naam teRaa
bas teRaa naam hii mukammal hai
is se bahtaR bhi nazm kyaa hogi***
Nice one :k: Nazm aa to gai seenay se baahir and darj ho gai kaghaz per
fara
February 21, 2011, 1:58pm
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Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh'tey hii nahiN
Koyal hamaisha ki terhaaN khubsurat intikhaab..
Koyal
February 21, 2011, 2:17pm
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Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh'tey hii nahiN
Koyal hamaisha ki terhaaN khubsurat intikhaab..
thanks fara :)
Koyal
February 21, 2011, 2:17pm
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Re: lafz kaaGhaz pe baiTh’tey hii nahiN
abhi puRi taRha nahi huiwe