gar zindagii mein mil gaye phir ittefaaq se
**poochhenge apanaa haal terii bebasii se hum
bebasii**
gar zindagii mein mil gaye phir ittefaaq se
**poochhenge apanaa haal terii bebasii se hum
bebasii**
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
Laakh ye chaha k us ko bhool jaoun FAraz.
HOSLAY apni jaga BEBASI apni jaga
Hosla
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
Mard Bay Hosla kerta hay zamany ka Gilla
Banda-e-Hurr k ley nishtar-e-taqdeer hay Nosh
NOsh
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
Bhai sahaab,
I believe its nosh not navish, Farsi word and Iqbal's sher .
The sher before this one is
Jis ke partou se munawwar rahi teri shab-e-dosh
Phir bhi ho sakta hai roshan woh charagh-e-Khamosh
Mard-e-be hosla karta hai zamaane ka gila
Band-e-hur Ke liye nashtar-e-taqdeer hai nosh
dosh, mosh and nosh - aaba rhyme scheme.
So sher for the word nosh
Giriyaa-e-shab se surkh hain aankhein
mujh balaa nosh ko sharaab kahaan - Meer
Sharaab
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Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
^ theek ker diya ..
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
Aashiq K liye Yaksaan, Ka’ba ho k But’khaana,
Yeh Jalwat-e-Janaanaa, Woh Khalwat-e-Janaanaa!
khalwat
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
Khalwat maiN Khula hum pah kay baibaak thi woh bhi
Muhtaat thay hum loog bhi, Chalaak thi woh bhi
Chalaak
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
Mujhay Chalak Hona Chahiye Tha
Zara Be-Baak Hona Chahiye Tha
Raha Aankhon mein Weerani Ka Aalam
**Inhen Namnaak Hona Chahiye Tha
Weerani**
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
:(
Sahra ko buhat naaz hay wairani par apni
waqif naheeN shayad mairay ujray hoye dil say
Waqif
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
Use apne farda ki fikar thi wo jo mera waqif-e-haal tha
Wo jo uski subha urooj thi wahi mera waqt-e-zawal tha
Zawaal
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
mere zawal se pehly mujhy chor gaya
haseen to tha hi zaheen bala ka tha
zaheen
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
*beniyaaz-e-sahar ho gai *
**sham-e-Gam moatabar ho gai
Sahar**
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
dil to maira udas hay Nasir
yah shehar keon sayen sayen krta hay
Udaas
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
Har wakt tere aaneki aas rehti hai,
Har pal tujhse milneki pyaas rehti hai,
Sab kuch hai yahan bus tu hi nahi,
**Isiliye shayad yeh zindagi udas rehti hai
zindagi**
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
nice poetry by ehsan
Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August
nice poetry by ehsan
he is the most senior person of GS
un k hum umar unhein Ehsan bhai aur baqi sab Ehsan uncle kehty hai
so plz dont mind