Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August

gar zindagii mein mil gaye phir ittefaaq se
**poochhenge apanaa haal terii bebasii se hum

bebasii**

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Laakh ye chaha k us ko bhool jaoun FAraz.
HOSLAY apni jaga BEBASI apni jaga

Hosla

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Mard Bay Hosla kerta hay zamany ka Gilla

Banda-e-Hurr k ley nishtar-e-taqdeer hay Nosh

NOsh

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Bhai sahaab,

I believe its nosh not navish, Farsi word and Iqbal's sher .

The sher before this one is

Jis ke partou se munawwar rahi teri shab-e-dosh
Phir bhi ho sakta hai roshan woh charagh-e-Khamosh

Mard-e-be hosla karta hai zamaane ka gila
Band-e-hur Ke liye nashtar-e-taqdeer hai nosh

dosh, mosh and nosh - aaba rhyme scheme.

So sher for the word nosh

Giriyaa-e-shab se surkh hain aankhein
mujh balaa nosh ko sharaab kahaan - Meer

Sharaab

Haroon Ahmad
DET - U.S. Central Command
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Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August

^ theek ker diya ..

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but khana

Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August

Aashiq K liye Yaksaan, Ka’ba ho k But’khaana,
Yeh Jalwat-e-Janaanaa, Woh Khalwat-e-Janaanaa!

khalwat

Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August

Khalwat maiN Khula hum pah kay baibaak thi woh bhi
Muhtaat thay hum loog bhi, Chalaak thi woh bhi

Chalaak

Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August

Mujhay Chalak Hona Chahiye Tha
Zara Be-Baak Hona Chahiye Tha

Raha Aankhon mein Weerani Ka Aalam
**Inhen Namnaak Hona Chahiye Tha

Weerani**

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:(
Sahra ko buhat naaz hay wairani par apni
waqif naheeN shayad mairay ujray hoye dil say

Waqif

Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August

Use apne farda ki fikar thi wo jo mera waqif-e-haal tha
Wo jo uski subha urooj thi wahi mera waqt-e-zawal tha

Zawaal

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mere zawal se pehly mujhy chor gaya
haseen to tha hi zaheen bala ka tha

zaheen

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Afsoos

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mo’atabar


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*beniyaaz-e-sahar ho gai *
**sham-e-Gam moatabar ho gai

Sahar**

Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August

dil to maira udas hay Nasir
yah shehar keon sayen sayen krta hay

Udaas

Re: Lafz Ba Lafz Poetry - August

Har wakt tere aaneki aas rehti hai,
Har pal tujhse milneki pyaas rehti hai,
Sab kuch hai yahan bus tu hi nahi,
**Isiliye shayad yeh zindagi udas rehti hai

zindagi**

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nice poetry by ehsan

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saans


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he is the most senior person of GS

un k hum umar unhein Ehsan bhai aur baqi sab Ehsan uncle kehty hai
so plz dont mind