Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

Aceones · January 18, 2015, 9:23am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

jo aana chaaho, hazaar rastay, na aana chaaho uzar lakhoon
mizaaj barham, taweel rasta, barasti baarish, Kharab mosam

taweel

ehsan · January 19, 2015, 6:16am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

bahut taweel shab-e-Gam hai kyaa kiyaa jaaye
**ummeed-e-subah bahut kam hai kyaa kiyaa jaaye

Subah**

Aceones · January 19, 2015, 9:13am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

ahl-e-qafas ki subh-e-chaman main khulay gee aankh
baad-e-saba say wada-o-paymaaN huway to hain

qafas

ehsan · January 20, 2015, 6:32am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

*aashiyaan jal gayaa gulsitaan lut gayaa ham qafas se nikal kar kidhar jaayenge *
**itane maanuus sayyaad se ho gaye ab rihaai milegii to mar jaayenge

sayyad**

muqawwee123 · January 20, 2015, 6:34am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

Itnay Manoos Sayyad Say Ho Gaye
Ab Rehaii Milaygi To Mar Jayen Ge.

Manoos

ehsan · January 20, 2015, 6:46am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

Mera shair parho.

muqawwee123 · January 20, 2015, 6:56am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

:omg: :rotfl:

taaweel

ehsan · January 20, 2015, 7:02am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

bahut taweel shab-e-Gam hai kyaa kiyaa jaaye
**ummeed-e-subah bahut kam hai kyaa kiyaa jaaye

Subah**

muqawwee123 · January 20, 2015, 7:07am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

taweel nahin taa'weel se shair post karna hai

ehsan · January 20, 2015, 7:34am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

Dont know the difference.

muqawwee123 · January 20, 2015, 7:36am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

taweel (tuwe) se lengthy, taaweel te se argument / reasoning

Aceones · January 21, 2015, 5:15am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

kartay hain Ghulamoon ko Ghulami pay razamand
taweel-e-masaael ko banatay hain bahana

Ghulami

Aceones · January 21, 2015, 5:19am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

taweel (تویل)to aap jantay hi hain

taaaaweel (تاویل) ye hay

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ehsan · January 21, 2015, 6:21am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

Thanks

ehsan · January 27, 2015, 6:36am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

Muhammad ki ghulami bara sila dy ge,
Chahray ko gulab ki tarh khila dy ge,
Mat chorna kbi dam-e-mustafa,
**Ye muhabbat tumhen Allah sy mila dy ge

Allah**

Aceones · January 27, 2015, 5:16pm

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

yeh meri waaraftagi, ma'az-allah
tum bhi aaye to kuch khabar na hui

waaraftagi

ehsan · January 28, 2015, 6:46am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

waaraftagi ka matlab?

Aceones · January 28, 2015, 6:59am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

waaraftagi = kisi cheez main gum hona, magan hona, hosh main na hona

ehsan · January 28, 2015, 9:21am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

Dil ki waaraftagi hai apni jagah
**Phir bhi kuch ehteyaat si hai abhi

Ehteyaat**

Howzat_1 · January 31, 2015, 5:54am

Re: Lafz ba Lafz (January 2015)

Andaisha