kyun likhoon:snooty:

Qalam haath main hai magar kya likhoon
kya os kay sawaloon ke jawab likhoon
Ya Jawaab main apnay kuch sawal likhoon
Ilfaaz bhi hain ,Juwaab bhi hain
magar likhoon to yeh sab kyunkar likhoon
na mile ga kuch osay jawab parh kar
na marham hogi hamaray dil ki kuch
to kis ke liye itna kuch likhoon
na samajh sakay ga hamaray ilfaz ki gehrai ko
to ek gham aur barhanay ko kyun likhoon

:@:

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

mera naam likho =)

btw it’s good¬! :k:

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

bas naam

:blush:??

i love u na likhoon:@:?

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

likhna likhana churu ab kuch parh bhi lo.. :@:

ps:- very nice dabbai.. :hugz:

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

:cb:

:snooty: ji bilkul

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

(na marham hogi hamary dil ki kuch) marham hogi nahi hoga huta hy…

(illif) nahi alif likhty hen…wesy kuch na likhny ka keh kar buhut kuch likh diyaa :slight_smile: gooood

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

:snooty: dabbay ko sab pata hai

:cb: thanks for correction

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

:hayaa:
dabbayyyyyyyyy wah wah :k:

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

:snooty:bas kabhi guroor nai kiya

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

nice

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

**Qalam haath main hai magar kya likhoon

**ye pehla fiqra bohat acha tha aur iss zameen main kaafi achi sha’iri ho sakti thi laiken aisa lagta hai aap nain isay pay kuch zayada waqt sarf nahin kiya

i’m tempted to write something in this zameen

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

:fatee: chacha jaan ziada waqt sarf bhi karti to aap jaisi umda shairi na kar pati:)

is ko ek haker koshish samajh lein

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

well i did write something in this zameen… have about 4 shairs so far

here is the matla

qalam hai mairy haath main, sochta hoon kaya likhon
dosh tujh ko doon ya phir, apni koi khataa likhon

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

aweseome:)

agar aap likhein to shayed kuch bhetar likhein
puri ghazal likhiye ga

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

Nice One Dabba

Re: kyun likhoon:snooty:

nice sharing Dabba keep it up wesay shaa’eri k leay koi romanctic sa naam rakho na :slight_smile: