kyun dil main ummeedoN ki bastiyan rakh gaya?

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal September 12, 2007, 3:43am 1

ye kauN zindagi main udasiyan rakh gaya mere aangan main yadon ki titliyan rakh gaya

aay’aa tha kuch dino ko, gaya hai sada ke liye
kyun meri hayat main tanhayiyan rakh gaya

tinka-tinka chunkar banaya tha aashiya’n
usii shaak per woh zalim bijli’yaan rakh gaya

aata hai yaad bahut humko, rote hai aksar
kyun dil main ummedon ki bastiyan rakh gaya?

Prince_Ali September 12, 2007, 3:50am 2

Re: kyun dil main ummeedoN ki bastiyan rakh gaya?

tinka-tinka chunkar banaya tha aashiya’n
usii shaak per woh zalim bijli’yaan rakh gaya

wah :k:

Dushwari September 12, 2007, 3:52am 3

Re: kyun dil main ummeedoN ki bastiyan rakh gaya?

Koyal,
mukarer.

Dushwari

Shab-e-Hijar September 12, 2007, 5:49am 4

Re: kyun dil main ummeedoN ki bastiyan rakh gaya?

very nice :k:

Koyal September 12, 2007, 2:01pm 5

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deep_ocean September 12, 2007, 2:09pm 6

Re: kyun dil main ummeedoN ki bastiyan rakh gaya?

Nice :k:

tum_bin_1 September 12, 2007, 5:01pm 7

Re: kyun dil main ummeedoN ki bastiyan rakh gaya?

Nice :)

Amal September 12, 2007, 5:23pm 8

Re: kyun dil main ummeedoN ki bastiyan rakh gaya?

Nice piece Koyal :k: … Thanx for sharing it with us

mariam September 12, 2007, 5:28pm 9

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nice:)

Koyal September 13, 2007, 11:16am 10

Re: kyun dil main ummeedoN ki bastiyan rakh gaya?

Aaj Kiss Baat Par Gussa Aaya ??????

EEMAAN September 13, 2007, 1:00pm 11

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Very nice..

Koyal September 15, 2007, 3:50am 12

Re: kyun dil main ummeedoN ki bastiyan rakh gaya?

thanks :)

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Koyal September 15, 2007, 3:50am 13

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shukria