kyaa Khabar thii ke main is darjaa badal jaaungaa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**kyaa Khabar thii ke main is darjaa badal jaaungaa
tujh ko kho duungaa tere Gham se sambhal jaaungaa

ajanabii ban ke miluungaa main tujhe mahafil men
tuu ne chhedii bhii to main baat badal jaaungaa

Dhuundh paaye na jahaan yaad bhii terii mujh ko
aise jangal men kisii roz nikal jaaungaa

zid men aaye hue maasom se bache kii tarah
Khud hii kashtii ko Dubone pe machal jaaunga**

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Re: kyaa Khabar thii ke main is darjaa badal jaaungaa

baqi sub theek hai…but ye last 2 lines kyon? i mean i he does all of teh above..its good for him…then why dibona ?

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Re: kyaa Khabar thii ke main is darjaa badal jaaungaa

Bro sy poochayn…
Wo ziyada ehsan tariqay sy Aapko samjha sakty hyn…

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Re: kyaa Khabar thii ke main is darjaa badal jaaungaa

unse tou larti rehti hoon :hehe: unki baat se ittefaq kaise ker sakti hoon kabhi …aap he samjha dijiye :smiley:

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Re: kyaa Khabar thii ke main is darjaa badal jaaungaa

Judae k baad Shair ny start mein to khud pay Qaboo rakha lykin is baat ka izhaar bhi krdiya k ye sab bardaasht krna asaan nhi, or jab ye sab na`qabil-e-bardaasht hony lagay ga to wo aapni hasti ko dubony ki koshish kr sakta hy/ya kry ga …

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Re: kyaa Khabar thii ke main is darjaa badal jaaungaa

ohh :frowning: