Kutta Naama - A Parody of my own poem

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

AQ August 1, 2005, 3:12am 1

Okay this parody is of my own poem; so those who felt disgusting last time when I did the parody of Parveen Shakir, please, take a moment of silence. Thanks

oh by the way, my original poem was inpired by Farhat Abbas Shah’s one poem so this is an indirect parody of his poem anyway:hoonh:

Sar-e-Shaam, Gali par nazraiN jaamataY rehnaa
BhoNKtay kuttoN say khud ko bachaataY rehnaa

Baazaar maiN jub bhee dekhtaa hooN maiN surat uss kee
Hawanaq chehraY pe maut kay kuttay manDlaataY rehnaa

Yaad uss ko woh ehd-e-kutta panaa ho kaY naa ho
Mujh ko hai yaad ussko ab dilaataY rehnaa

JaanaY waalaY ko kabhi aana tau naheeN hai laikin
kuttaa jo uss paar ho koi, tau hai subb ko aataY rehnaa:D

Yaad jo kabhi aataY haiN lamhaY woh Maah-e-December kaY
Sard raatoN maiN medaan maiN kuttaY laRaataY rehnaa

Woh uss kee bay Wafaayee, Woh bay Rukhi, woh Sard Mehri
Raat maiN bhee abb tau kuttaY say daraataY rehnaa

Hai sharamsaar Ishq, Mohabbat Sar nigooN hai laikin
QissaY KuttoN kaY Anwaar phir bhee sunaateY rehnaa

Golden_Scorpion_1 August 1, 2005, 4:01am 2

Re: Kutta Naama - A Parody of my own poem

:k:

AQ August 1, 2005, 4:22am 3

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^
phir maiN 'woh waali' pardoy post karooN ;)

do you take the responsibility of me not getting banned :p ?

Golden_Scorpion_1 August 1, 2005, 4:34am 4

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Kardo… Agar Aisa Wesa Kuch hua tou MaiN HaTa donga…

AQ August 1, 2005, 4:37am 5

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then forget it:D

mazaa tau tub hai jub freedom of speech ho.. but wait.. we are not a democratic board :D

---------> Now Time pass with Nikami :)

---------> Now Time pass with Nikami :)

Golden_Scorpion_1 August 1, 2005, 4:58am 6

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Even in Democracy U cannot Insult someone... Can U?

If Ur wording are Offenssive to someone.. its CRIME even on Planet Mars(My Homeland) :D

AQ August 1, 2005, 4:59am 7

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I dun think my parody is insulting to anyone but must be sarcastic enough to pull an Anwer Maqsood joke on it :-)

but kher, you are very scared and insecure about it.. I won't give u a heart attack :D

Barbie_Girl August 1, 2005, 5:43am 8

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Yeh galiyon ke Awara be-kaar kuttay
ke bakhsha gaya jin ko zoq-e gadai
zamanay ki phatkar sarmaya un ka
jahan bhar ki dhutkar un ki kamai

na Araam shab ko, na rahat saweray
ghalzat main ghar, naliyon main baseray
jo bigrain tou ik dusray se lara do
zara aik roti ka tukra dikha dou
yeh har aik ki thokrain khanay walay
yeh faqon se ukta ke mar janay walay

yeh mazloom makhlooq gar sar uthay
tou insan sab sarkashi bhool jay
yeh chahain tou duniya ko apna bana lain
yeh Aaaqaon ki haddiyan tak chaba lain
koi in ko Ehsas-e zillat dila de
koi in ki soi hui dum hila de

---------> Now Time pass with Nikami :)

AQ August 1, 2005, 5:46am 9

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^
You should’ve known that I’m Iqbal’s biggest fan

that was hilarious though:D

uncles....

Barbie_Girl August 1, 2005, 5:47am 10

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oh God
jhoot pakra gaya
not iqbal's poem.....you jali shayar

AQ August 1, 2005, 5:49am 11

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Yeh Ghazi yeh teray pur Asraar bandaY
jinhaiN tu nay bakhshaa hai zoq-e-Khudaaie

Dau neem inn kee ThoKar say sehraa-O-daryaa
SimaT kar pahaaR inn kee hebat saY RaaYee

aap nay issi kee parody pesh kee hai

---------> Now Time pass with Nikami :)

Barbie_Girl August 1, 2005, 5:51am 12

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oh Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Anwaar ..i cant belive this.............this is not a parody uncle...........yeh faiz ki poem hai...and i love it

AQ August 1, 2005, 5:55am 13

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and faiz did the parody of Iqbal… you should believe that.

Great poets have done it all the time…

you can see Zia-ul-Huq Qaasmi doing the parody of Saleem Kauser’s “main khiyaal hooN kissi aur kaa” to “Main lehaaf hooN kissi aur kaa”

similarly Inayat Ali KhaN Tonkee doing the parody of Ahmed Faraz “Ab kay tajdeed-e-wafaa kaa neheeN imkaaN jaanaaN” as something like “Woh rahaa khaRaa airport par aur maiN kehtaa rahaa Jaa naa! jaa naa”

Barbie_Girl August 1, 2005, 5:57am 14

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whatever but you should have known that i was not a parodier....

AQ August 1, 2005, 5:58am 15

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I did not ever say you did it… I was merely saying that the parody is of Iqbal’s poem and you should’ve known that I am a big big fan of him >>>

---------> Now Time pass with Nikami :)

Golden_Scorpion_1 August 1, 2005, 5:59am 16

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A Guy Cannot Give me HEART ATTACK…

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AQ August 1, 2005, 6:01am 17

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zor kaa jhaTkaa zaraa dheeraY saY laGay

Barbie_Girl August 1, 2005, 6:05am 18

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huh

uncles....

Golden_Scorpion_1 August 1, 2005, 6:13am 19

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Ye kisi cheez ka Ishtihaar tha na… on TV ?

system August 1, 2005, 7:37am 20

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Must be Dada Abbu’s influence… :k:

---------> Now Time pass with Nikami :)