kul jo merii zaat ka hawala thay....~

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 4, 2004, 7:22pm

Aetbaar ker k chot kha chuke hien
Apne zubt ko boht aazma chuke hien

Khud ko takleef hoee tu ehsas howa
Kitne teer dosro`N per chala chuke hien

Mere dukh ki wo dasta`N sun ker bolay
Aap ye Qissa pehle bhee suna chukey hien

Kul jo merii zaat ka hawala thay
Aaj mera naam tuk bhula chukay hien

Aay tabeeb-e-dil barii dair ker dee
Aap k mareez jaan se ja chuke hien

Takha_Hara · October 4, 2004, 7:24pm

:k: bahut khoob

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 4, 2004, 7:44pm

thanks T-H :~)

shoaib_akhter · October 4, 2004, 8:53pm

wah :~}

Pramod · October 4, 2004, 10:59pm

Aetbaar ker k chot kha chuke hien
Apne zubt ko boht aazma chuke hien

Khud ko takleef hoee tu ehsas howa
Kitne teer dosro`N per chala chuke hien

YuN to purii ghazal hii bahot achhi hai.magar ye do sher to kya kahna ?
maza aa gay paDh ke...
thanks for sharing ...** HH **

Koyal · October 5, 2004, 2:47am

:)

show_sha · October 5, 2004, 5:03am

wah !

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 5, 2004, 11:21am

thanks for liking.. shobby uncle.. pramod bhai.. koyal.. show sha :~)

Maheen2002 · October 5, 2004, 5:13pm

Nice

WiseGuy · October 5, 2004, 6:58pm

:)

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 5, 2004, 7:35pm

Menu: thanks :)

Wisuu :)

chand_chehra · October 6, 2004, 12:14am

:-)

cuteepie · October 6, 2004, 3:28am

nice :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 6, 2004, 11:16am

thx :~)

chanduu :~)

Maheen2002 · October 6, 2004, 11:17am

^ heartuuu..come on msn yaara

Daagh · October 6, 2004, 12:39pm

dil ki taaqeed hai har haal mein ho paas-e-vafa
kya sitam hai ke sitam_gar ko sitam_gar na kaho

:halo:

Daagh · October 6, 2004, 12:41pm

i thot it was Maheens thread :halo:

waise tumhari ghazal is pretty… as always

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 6, 2004, 6:56pm

kis ki ghazal? :halo:

ghazal_kisi_ke · October 8, 2004, 2:52am

calling me .. halo .. :-p ..

khair beautiful choice as usuall ..

HeArT_HaCKeR · October 8, 2004, 9:48am

nahi tu

thankss motii