Kuch Yadain Meray Maazi Ki..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity October 29, 2007, 5:24am 1

Aik Nazm,

Meray Maazi Ke Auraqo’n Pe
Kuch Bikhri Bikhri Yaadain Bhi

Kuch Gul’daston Ke Tohfay Hain
Kuch Khaar Bhari Soghatain Bhi

Kuch Wasl Ke Komal Lamhay Hain
Kuch Hijr Ki Tanha Raatain Bhi

Kuch Pyar Ki Pyari Si Fathain
Phir Baad Main Sangee’n Maatain Bhi

Kuch Bheegi Bheegi Yaadain Hain
Kuch Aankhon Ki Barsatain Bhi

Kuch Sath Nibhanay Ke Waaday
Phir Jhoot Ki Gehri Ghaatain Bhi

Kuch Jaagti Aankhon Ke Sapnay
Kuch Khuaab Main Darti Raatain Bhi

Kabhi Tanhai Ki Mehfil Aur
Kuch Bay’maani Mulaqatain Bhi

Main Sochta Hoon Ger Waqt Milay
Her Yaad Ko Ek Unwaan Main Doon
Her Unwaa’n Per Ek Baab Likhon
Phir Baabo’n Ko Tarteeb Karon
Aur Aik Haseen Kitaab Likhon

Phir Sochta Hoon Ke Waqt Mera
Abb Itna Bhi Bay’kaar Nahi
Ke Maazi Ke Unn Lamhon Se
Mujhe Thora Sa Bhi Pyaar Nahi

(Ahmer, October 23, 2007)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

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SJ October 29, 2007, 6:53am 2

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Amazing …
Bohat he Khobsorat Nazam…

Phir Sochta Hoon Ke Waqt Mera
Abb Itna Bhi Bay’kaar Nahi
Ke Maazi Ke Unn Lamhon Se
Mujhe Thora Sa Bhi Pyaar Nahi

Ending kamal hai…
Bar Bar parhnay par bhi Nae lagtee hai:)

redidentity October 29, 2007, 6:58am 3

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hey thnx alot dear

SJ October 29, 2007, 6:59am 4

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Haww…tum yahan he thay:)

being_lonely October 29, 2007, 7:07am 5

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Its pretty Good Ahmer

Ali_2 October 29, 2007, 7:08am 6

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Aik Nazm,

Meray Maazi Ke Auraqo’n Pe
Kuch Bikhri Bikhri Yaadain Bhi

Kuch Gul’daston Ke Tohfay Hain
Kuch Khaar Bhari Soghatain Bhi

Kuch Wasl Ke Komal Lamhay Hain
Kuch Hijr Ki Tanha Raatain Bhi

Kuch Pyar Ki Pyari Si Fathain
Phir Baad Main Sangee’n Maatain Bhi

Kuch Bheegi Bheegi Yaadain Hain
Kuch Aankhon Ki Barsatain Bhi

Kuch Sath Nibhanay Ke Waaday
Phir Jhoot Ki Gehri Ghaatain Bhi

Kuch Jaagti Aankhon Ke Sapnay
Kuch Khuaab Main Darti Raatain Bhi

Kabhi Tanhai Ki Mehfil Aur
Kuch Bay’maani Mulaqatain Bhi

Main Sochta Hoon Ger Waqt Milay
Her Yaad Ko Ek Unwaan Main Doon
Her Unwaa’n Per Ek Baab Likhon
Phir Baabo’n Ko Tarteeb Karon
Aur Aik Haseen Kitaab Likhon

Phir Sochta Hoon Ke Waqt Mera
Abb Itna Bhi Bay’kaar Nahi
Ke Maazi Ke Unn Lamhon Se
Mujhe Thora Sa Bhi Pyaar Nahi

(Ahmer, October 23, 2007)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

Amazing man :k:

yaar tum to waqai main aik achay shair ho

redidentity October 29, 2007, 7:15am 7

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thnx alot SiD Jee n Ali.. so nice of you ppl

Happy Eid Milad-un-Nabi! :)

SJ October 29, 2007, 7:24am 8

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Thanks Kyun Kaha:smilestar:

redidentity October 29, 2007, 8:14am 9

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umm.. umm.. ummmmmmm…

arsalanh2000 October 29, 2007, 8:20am 10

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Its nice, Ahmer bhai u are doing superb ...

deadsoul October 29, 2007, 8:24am 11

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buhat zabardast red
geoooooo
khooob

redidentity October 29, 2007, 8:59am 12

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thnx alot DS jee n arsalan :)

~**~ Tussi Baray ----- Ho ~~~~ ~**~

moonmine October 29, 2007, 9:13am 13

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bohat Zabardast ...

bheegiyaad October 29, 2007, 9:18am 14

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very well written
i enjoy alot reading it n become one of my all time fav:)

redidentity October 29, 2007, 9:30am 15

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thnx alot moonmine :)

redidentity October 29, 2007, 9:32am 16

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hey thnx.. bheegiyaad for adding in alltime favs..

Timepaas

Shumaisa October 29, 2007, 12:16pm 17

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woww Its awesome Ahmer.. Your Nazm is too good
keep it up!! :k:

Dushwari October 30, 2007, 1:18am 18

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redidentity,
go ahead, i will edit your book. get started!
very nice poem.
best,
Dushwari

redidentity:

Aik Nazm,

Meray Maazi Ke Auraqo'n Pe Kuch Bikhri Bikhri Yaadain Bhi

Kuch Gul'daston Ke Tohfay Hain Kuch Khaar Bhari Soghatain Bhi

Kuch Wasl Ke Komal Lamhay Hain Kuch Hijr Ki Tanha Raatain Bhi

Kuch Pyar Ki Pyari Si Fathain Phir Baad Main Sangee'n Maatain Bhi

Kuch Bheegi Bheegi Yaadain Hain Kuch Aankhon Ki Barsatain Bhi

Kuch Sath Nibhanay Ke Waaday Phir Jhoot Ki Gehri Ghaatain Bhi

Kuch Jaagti Aankhon Ke Sapnay Kuch Khuaab Main Darti Raatain Bhi

Kabhi Tanhai Ki Mehfil Aur Kuch Bay'maani Mulaqatain Bhi

Main Sochta Hoon Ger Waqt Milay Her Yaad Ko Ek Unwaan Main Doon Her Unwaa'n Per Ek Baab Likhon Phir Baabo'n Ko Tarteeb Karon Aur Aik Haseen Kitaab Likhon

Phir Sochta Hoon Ke Waqt Mera Abb Itna Bhi Bay'kaar Nahi Ke Maazi Ke Unn Lamhon Se Mujhe Thora Sa Bhi Pyaar Nahi

(Ahmer, October 23, 2007)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

redidentity October 30, 2007, 4:45am 19

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thnx

redidentity October 30, 2007, 4:46am 20

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thnx Dushwari.. so sweet of U..