kuch rakha

muslima_1 · February 9, 2006, 9:07pm

aankhon mein tha ghum
pir bhi honton par muskurahat sajaye raki
Dil jal raha tha aag mein
magar dil ki har takleef chupaye raki
ghalat fehmi mein ho kar usne na maani meri koi iltija
bas apni hi baat manvaye raki
wo tu hain is dil se munsalik
is liye tu un ki yaad ab tak dil se lagaye raki

IS · February 9, 2006, 9:37pm

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very Nice Sis

muslima_1 · February 9, 2006, 9:57pm

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ye baat kitni baar kahenge?

IS · February 9, 2006, 10:28pm

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^ jitni baar achi poetry parhnay ko milti rahi :)

muslima_1 · February 11, 2006, 10:26pm

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that cud be 4eva

shim_thebest · February 14, 2006, 9:17pm

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as alwaz fabls.............love it

twin_born · February 14, 2006, 9:27pm

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nice haii

happy valentines day to u MUSLIMa

Yeh dekhoo hirnee jayseee *aankh hai uss kee *

Pankhraay jaysaaay** hont hai uss kaay
**
Ghulab kaay phool jaysay chera haii us kaa

muslima_1 · February 14, 2006, 9:33pm

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thanks shim
t_b translation plz i didnt understand half of the words

twin_born · February 14, 2006, 9:50pm

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Dimagh bhii thora use kar looo ,

kush idea hii chachiee , samajhaa to kisiii ko koi nahii saktaaa ,

try again ,

muslima_1 · February 14, 2006, 9:53pm

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nahien pata mamooo
aap bata de i dont know wat phankray is

twin_born · February 14, 2006, 10:15pm

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mein kab saay mamoo hoo gyaaa ,

sice how long u r reading poetery , u reall havn t heard this word ,

Phankeryy ,

twin_born · February 14, 2006, 10:15pm

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go and chk it out in URDU LUGGAT means dictionary

muslima_1 · February 14, 2006, 10:17pm

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i know wat luggat means

muslima_1 · February 14, 2006, 10:19pm

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jab se main aunty aur chachee ho gaye
neva cum across it i havent been reading poetry 4 years u know
jab bata den na i dont want to search in luggat

twin_born · February 14, 2006, 10:22pm

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mein naay phlaay hii scoochat bataa doooh ,

Phir app poochana that yeh luggat kyaa hotaaa ,

u know kaaa , u grilld never use ur mind , u just want to save it for afterwordss ...haiii naaa , yaa nahiiii

muslima_1 · February 14, 2006, 10:25pm

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Nahein mujhe luggat ka matlab pata tha
its a arabic word

larkian nahein maante tu aap hi maan jaye

twin_born · February 14, 2006, 10:34pm

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hum naay to man-na hii haay ,

as we dont have a second option

muslima_1 · February 15, 2006, 8:20pm

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if i know im right then obviously wont giv u a secaond option
ab mene 'lughat' mein bhi check kia nahien mila ab bata den??
but i dont understand why i have to look in dictionary its ur mssg u want me to understand so u tell me the meaning.

twin_born · February 15, 2006, 8:40pm

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may be i myself doesn t know ....

Mereee URdu bheee asmaaan par haii naaa ,

u know i havn t study urdu since last years ,

the last i study t wsa , second year ...

so u can judge better ..hmmmm

muslima_1 · February 15, 2006, 8:49pm

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…u dont know wat it means either so wat was all that

mein urdu ki teacher hoo kya jo mujhe pata hona chahye