KUCH PAL K LIYE....

ae gardish-e-duraan,omr-e-rawaan…


kuch pal k liye sastaany dy…


ye naaty reet,ye rasm-o-rawah..


in sab sy aankh churaany dy..



ye jabr-e-musalsal rishton k


ye bandhan aahon,aansoo k..


ab zanjeeren si lagti hen..


in zanjeeron sy pal du pall



thuri si hamen aazadi dy..


ae omr-e-rawan kuch thehr zara..,


ae dil ki khalish kuch chaen tu ly…



is dasht-e-alam men deeda-e-nam


kuch khuaab sy dekha kartin hen…,


khush fehmi k behlawon say..


kuch harf-e-tasalli deti hen…



is ranj-o-alam ny turaa hay..


kuch aur ghamon men churaa hy,


ye rishton ki zanjeeren ab tu saath sada ki saathi hen


(ye turr bhi kesy sakty hen?)



ae omr-e-rawan kuch pal k liye..


aasoda nagar men jaany dy..


kuch pal k liye sastaany dy..


oss shukh ada sy pochh tu len..



is raah py kiyon ye pagal dil..,


anjaani lay py dharka hay..


is murr py kiuon ye dman-e-dil


phir kis k aagy phelaa hay…??



ye nazren unki raahon men kiyon sajda rezi karti hen?


ye bharam,ana ki dewaaren..


is karb-o-junoon sy haari hen..,


ae gardish-e-duraan to hi bataaa



is simt py chal kar kiya huga..


is dard ka darmaan kiya huga


is ruog ka marham kiya huga.


is dard ka haasil hijr hy kiya..?


is raah ka haasil hijr hy kiyaa


ae omr-e-rawaan kuchh to hi bata..!

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE…

***ye nazren unki raahon men kiyon sajda rezi karti hen?

ye bharam,ana ki dewaaren..***

is karb-o-junoon sy haari hen..,

ae gardish-e-duraan to hi bataaa

is simt py chal kar kiya huga..

is dard ka darmaan kiya huga

is ruog ka marham kiya huga.

is dard ka haasil hijr hy kiya..?

is raah ka haasil hijr hy kiyaa

ae omr-e-rawaan kuchh to hi bata..!

Awesome Awesome.. simply awesome… enjoyed reading it all along - even if it was twice as long as it is, it would be an honour to read it…

You have expressed the emotions, the wishes, and the hopes of the humanity at large in very simple words… Simply Great :k:

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE…

^ agreed
zabardast :k:

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE…

o wah ji wah … gupistaaan k shaa ero .. :bigthumbs:

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE....

buhut nawazish......

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE....

Beautiful.

S.786, you are the most under rated poet on here. I stopped coming in after Zamil left but there is some hope. Please write more.

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE....

thank u so much aasif ji....

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE....

***is ranj-o-alam ny turaa hay..

kuch aur ghamon men churaa hy,***

ye rishton ki zanjeeren ab tu saath sada ki saathi hen

(ye turr bhi kesy sakty hen?)
**zabardast sk jee **
**achi nazam hi .......dad qabool ho bohat sare **

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE....

thank u... s.k ??

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE…

goood one S.786…great

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE....

v.thans abeeha

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE…

hey how come i missed this earlier?

superb :k:
bohat hi khoob hai

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE....

buhut nawazish

Bravo..............Buhat Zabardast:)

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE....

v.thanks mudasir

Wah, Amazing stuff :-)

Re: KUCH PAL K LIYE....

shukriya,,gul