KucH Mazeed Ash'aar

Zarf paimaana hai qadd o qaamat-e-insaan ka
Vaar dushman par jo karna ho, karo ehsaan ka


Ab samajh mein aaya hai dam kahaN mohabbat mein
Pyaar karne waaloN ko ____ qismatein milaati hain


Jaan de d to kaha, " Dekha ham na kehte they
Ye cHoR jaaye ga is shakhs mein wafaa hi nahi "


Zindagi aaisi guzaari hai _____ tere aashiq ne
Tu jo sun paaye to ma’shooq se aashiq ho jaye


Keh rahe hain, tera shaayar mar gaya hai
Lo bataao _____ is ko jeena jaante they !


Barq o baadal ki laRaai mein hamaara ghar jalaa
Barq o baadal phir se lekin ho gaye mehv-e-safar


**Be-sood fikr-e-farda k faani hubaab-e-zeest
" **Babar ba-aaish kosh k aalam dobara neest "


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Nice collection Zamil sahab :k: Thanx for sharing with us :slight_smile:

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baadal wala sheir kuch acha lag raha hey , baqiyon ka kuch kaha tou phir ina lecture sunna parey ga:p thanks for sharing Zamil:-)

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Shukria Janab :slight_smile:

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**Thanx :slight_smile: **
Lekin lecture pasand na pasand ya tanqeed karne pe nahi dia tha, aap ne baat (naee ya puraani shaairy) hi aaisi kahi thi k mujhe tafseelan jawab dena paRa. Tanqeed is always welcome, waise apni saari acHi poetry agar yahaN share kar d to…:halo:

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aap ney suna hi hoga '' Old is Gold ''
Oh come on man, meiN ney tou aik normal si baat kahi thi, aap ney tou dil pe hi ley liyaa, well anyhow mera maqsad aapko hurt karna nahi thaa:-) aap apni sab sey purani shaairi bhi post kareiN kon rok sakta hey bhala wesey bhi aap zamaney ki parwah nahi kartey na, tou comment key liye bhi tayyar raha kareiN iss tarah tou hota hey iss tarah key kaamon mein:-)
by the way aap ney abhi taq apni aik puraniiii poem post nahi ki '' meiN shaayar hooN'' :p

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O Gul jee aap samjheeN nahi, main comments se nahi ghabraata na dil pe leta huN, aap ne comments diye main ne jawaab dia, simple. Main to us taveel jawaab ki waja bayaan kar raha tha, thats all.
*PaRhne waale har kisi ko kahaaN naseeb hote hain, my readers r my asset yaara. Aur wo poem dusre forum pe paRh li aap ne, to wahaaN saath hi ye bhi paRha hoga k "...itni naee poem hai k likhte hi post kar raha huN." Shayad aap hi k liye likha tha :D *

Take Care :)

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v nice:)