Jaan-e-man jaan-e-jaaN
hukm hey issliye kar rahi hoon bayaaN
tuney poocha hey, meiN
kaesey jeeti hooN ab?
kaesay barrhta hey din, kaesi ghahtti hey shab?
kya kahooN Jaan-e-man? kya likhooN jaan-e-jaaN?
haal bad-haal hey, adh khula jaal hey
sirf maazi ka tha ik dareecha khulaa
dukh k arshey sey ab, jab kabhi bhi udher
meiN ney ki hey nazar, soojhta kuch nahiN
na dareecha na Tu
dhuhnd hi dhuhnd hey
Umr k chaar soo
Zindagi k liye sung taryaaq k kootetey kootetey
zehar k shehr k raaston par merey
lafz zakhmi huwey, zakhm chhalni huwey
dard goorrhey huwey, khawaab boorrhey huwey
sheir kehna bhi ab chaar din aur hey
aur rehna bhi ab chaar din aur hey
Alwida jaan-e-man
Alwida jaan-e-jaaN…!
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masa nahe aiya:naraz:
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I Liked it :)
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NIce POem GUL.
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Sis Its Amazing!
:)
Re: – Kuch baateiN–
nice :k:
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nice:)
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lafz lafz se dil ko chaak kiya aap ne Gul :(. behtareen nazm hae
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Boaht achi nazam hai Gul,,,thanks for sharing..
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it reminds me of a song… kabhi alvida na kahna 
Re: – Kuch baateiN–
Gul achi poem hey. Bohat high-class nahi, as per your own standards, lekin phir bhi achi hey 
k: Thanx for sharing it with us 