Kuch baat nirali thee ous meh laqa ki

Aalhan · January 21, 2004, 6:40pm

**Kuch baat nirali thee ous meh laqa kee
Chahee jo wafa ousnay tou jee bhar kay jafa kee

Jati theeN baharaiN bhee chaman choar kay jis waqt
Bulbul bhee to sayyad nay ous waqt rayha kee!

Kehtay thay keh marnay meiN bhi bulbul kee khata thee
Kambakht nay daikho to zara hum say dagha kee

Hay hukm keh mar mar kay jeeyouN, jee kay marooN maiN!
May~aad barha dee hay mairee ousnay saza kee

Gar waqt~e~nazaa soorat~e~zaiba ka ho deedaar
Atee hoee ghariyaaN bhi teher jaiN qaza kee!

Kuch waqt kay ghaoo thay to kuch gard~e~zamana
Pehli see to soorat na thee ous shokh ada kee!

Vaiz nay bhi may~khanay ko jee khoal kay loota
Kafir o MusalmaaN ki bhi tafreeq mita dee

Yunhi rahay abaad sada phoolay phalay tou!
Hur lamha tairay haq maiN yeh ~Aalhan~ nay dua kee!

**

Muslim_Queen · January 21, 2004, 8:37pm

nice.

cuteepie · January 22, 2004, 1:32pm

:k:

Aalhan · January 23, 2004, 2:55pm

**Muslim_Queen and cuteepie,
thanks guys :=)

**

Shoki · January 23, 2004, 7:54pm

AQ · January 24, 2004, 3:21am

oh wow. that is a master piece buddy:k:

Vaiz nay bhi may~khanay ko jee khoal kay loota
Kafir o MusalmaaN ki bhi tafreeq mita dee

bahut khoob:)

Aalhan · January 25, 2004, 8:44pm

**shoki :=)

Anwaar Quresh bhaijaan, buhot buhot shukria, meherbani.
You're too kind :=). I'm glad you liked it.**

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 26, 2004, 12:47am

beautiful:k:

u should keep writing:flower1:

Azad · January 26, 2004, 5:16am

Vaiz nay bhi may~khanay ko jee khoal kay loota

hummm

Farwa · January 26, 2004, 10:49am

wah....bohat khoob!

keep it up :)

Aalhan · January 26, 2004, 11:41am

**ghazal kisi ke and Farwa, it
means so much to see the responses. Good to
see that you liked it. Readers' feedback is always
the inspirational factor for any poet/author. :=)

Azad, I hope you're ok :P**

Nickless · January 26, 2004, 12:16pm

Awesome stuff~! Keep sharing with us plz :-)