koyal ki kook suN k dhuuN wasal ki chee'ri hai

Koyal · February 6, 2008, 2:55am

***badlooN ki aa'nkhooN maiN aa'nsooN k day'ray haiN aisay payaa'ray oasam maiN aj hum aklelay haiN

shabnum ko oorh’ni maiN pholooN ne mu chupaa’eya
paani ki khamooshi maiN sur saat bakhey’ray haiN

koyal ki kook suN k dhuuN wasal ki chee’ri hai
yaadooN ne teri aa k kaa’ee zakham udhhey’ray haiN***

muddii · February 6, 2008, 3:53am

Re: koyal ki kook suN k dhuuN wasal ki chee'ri hai

Buhat Zabardast Choice:)

redidentity · February 6, 2008, 4:39am

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buhat khoob :k:

Shumaisa · February 6, 2008, 5:56am

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Nice.. :k:

ASA · February 6, 2008, 9:36am

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deadsoul · February 6, 2008, 9:37am

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beautiful
buhat khib

hiba_no.1 · February 6, 2008, 10:11am

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nice :)

Aryaan · February 6, 2008, 10:51am

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Very Nice Koyal..:k:

Shab-e-Hijar · February 6, 2008, 3:52pm

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last shair :k:

WiseGuy · February 6, 2008, 4:26pm

Re: koyal ki kook suN k dhuuN wasal ki chee'ri hai

badlooN ki aa'nkhooN maiN aa'nsooN k day'ray haiN
aisay payaa'ray moasam maiN aj hum aklelay haiN

kitna tazaad hai pehlay shair main.
becharay badal kee aankon main aansoowon kay dairay hain aur shair sahab farmatay "pyaray mausam". Aanso tu ghami kee alamat hotay hain.

Baqi acha hai thank you for sharing :)

EEMAAN · February 6, 2008, 5:02pm

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Bohat khoob..

sunny_nicky · February 7, 2008, 12:05am

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:)nicee koyal g

Jhanjharewali · February 7, 2008, 7:14am

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bahot khuub

Daanie · February 8, 2008, 3:38pm

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buhut khoob :)

Koyal · February 9, 2008, 4:07am

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thanks :)

Koyal · February 9, 2008, 4:08am

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thanks jhanjar wali :)

Koyal · February 9, 2008, 4:08am

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thanks sunny :)

Koyal · February 9, 2008, 4:09am

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thanks emaan :)

muddii · February 9, 2008, 4:15am

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Aaaaaaaawwww mujhay thanks kyun nahee boola:( me nay bhee to tareef key thee:smack:

Aryaan · February 9, 2008, 12:21pm

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Ab harr kisi ke thanks ka jawaab dena zaroori thori hota hai..