Kooch nahin mila?

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Swera April 27, 2003, 4:00am 1

*Phloon say thori si khushbhoo li
Hawa nay uran bhi di
Suraj nay agg dey di
Chand nay kaha yai chandani bhi le lo
Taroon nay jimmilahat bhi bhejj di
Qus-e-Qaza nay ranng bhi deiya hain
Ank nay masti bhi di or ansoo bhi diay
Dard bhi mila dill ko,
Intazar bhi mila tuhfay main
Waqat nay gehri choot bhi di
Sham nay phir thori si udasi bhi de di
Tanhai bhi mili,
Thori si hansi bhi mili ghar-cha ghamoon say thi dosti
Itna kooch to mill gaiya
Phir bhi shikwa karatin hain
Kooch nahin mila!
*

By Subha

Dilsay April 27, 2003, 4:02am 2

Masha Allah thanks for sharing

WiseGuy April 27, 2003, 4:03am 3

Re: Kooch nahin mila?

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
*Phloon say thori si khushbhoo liHawa nay uran bhi di
Suraj nay agg dey di
Chand nay kaha yai chandani bhi le lo
Taroon nay jimmilahat bhi bhejj di
Qus-e-Qaza nay ranng bhi deiya hain
Ank nay masti bhi di or ansoo bhi diay
Dard bhi mila dill ko,
Intazar bhi mila tuhfay main
Waqat nay gehri choot bhi di
Sham nay phir thori si udasi bhi de di
Tanhai bhi mili,
Thori si hansi bhi mili ghar-cha ghamoon say thi dosti
Itna kooch to mill gaiya
Phir bhi shikwa karatin hain
Kooch nahin mila!
*

By Subha
[/QUOTE]

Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :)

Bohat achi hai, thanks for sharing :)

Swera April 27, 2003, 4:10am 4

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Masha Allah thanks for sharing
[/QUOTE]

U welcome:)

Swera April 27, 2003, 4:14am 5

Re: Re: Kooch nahin mila?

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :)

Bohat achi hai, thanks for sharing :)
[/QUOTE]

Thanks & U welcome:)

Rabia_Chaudhry April 27, 2003, 4:27am 6

sweara kool poem,....i like it,.......!!!!!!

Mah b kuch Arz kerna chati hoon,...

TUME PAANA TO CHAHU,
LEKIN KABHI PAA NAHIN SAKTI
ITNI DOORIAN HAI HAMARE BEETH
ME TERI KABHI HO NAHIN SAKTI

Adeel786 April 27, 2003, 4:43am 7

Re: Kooch nahin mila?

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *

Itna kooch to mill gaiya
Phir bhi shikwa karatin hain
Kooch nahin mila!
*

By Subha
[/QUOTE]

hmm nice (yeh shikwa jo hey naa ager insan kerna choar dey tu i think insan sub khuch paa ley )

i like ur poet .
Thanx for sharing.

Swera April 27, 2003, 4:50am 8

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Rabia Chaudhry: *
sweara kool poem,....i like it,.......!!!!!!

Mah b kuch Arz kerna chati hoon,...

TUME PAANA TO CHAHU,
LEKIN KABHI PAA NAHIN SAKTI
ITNI DOORIAN HAI HAMARE BEETH
ME TERI KABHI HO NAHIN SAKTI
[/QUOTE]

Thank u rabia:)

Nice shair:)

Swera April 27, 2003, 4:51am 9

Re: Re: Kooch nahin mila?

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Adeel786: *

hmm nice (yeh shikwa jo hey naa ager insan kerna choar dey tu i think insan sub khuch paa ley )

i like ur poet .
Thanx for sharing.
[/QUOTE]

Thnkx & u welcome:)

Ji theak kaha ap nay...
lakin phir insan kesay kehlay?
:):D

HeArT_HaCKeR April 27, 2003, 5:21pm 10

:k: bohat achi hai

Rabia_Chaudhry April 27, 2003, 5:32pm 11

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *

Thank u rabia:)

Nice shair:)
[/QUOTE]

thanx saba ji.....

Azad April 27, 2003, 6:46pm 12

yeh howi na baat :k:

Jal_Pari April 28, 2003, 4:17am 13

wow thanks for sharing :)

Swera April 28, 2003, 4:25am 14

Shukaria:)

Swera April 28, 2003, 4:27am 15

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Rabia Chaudhry: *

thanx saba ji.....
[/QUOTE]

U welcome,

and saba nahin hoon ji:)