Kon Kehta Hai Tujhay Mein Ne Bhula Rakha Hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

aabla_pa December 4, 2006, 3:34pm 1

kaun kahataa hai tujhe mai.n ne bhulaa rakhaa hai
terii yaado.n ko kaleje se lagaa rakhaa hai

lab pe aahe.n bhii nahii.n aa.Nkh me.n aa.Nsuu bhii nahii.n
dil ne har raaz muhabbat kaa chhupaa rakhaa hai

tuune jo dil ke a.ndhere me.n jalaayaa thaa kabhii
vo diyaa aaj bhii siine me.n jalaa rakhaa hai

dekh jaa aake mahakate huye zaKhmo.n kii bahaar
mai.n ne ab tak tere gulashan ko sajaa rakhaa hai

sanam999 December 4, 2006, 4:00pm 2

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gr8 stuff!!! :)

pk786 December 4, 2006, 4:05pm 3

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nice one

mahamkhan December 7, 2006, 10:06am 4

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Nice one!

sad_affect December 7, 2006, 10:37am 5

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Something Gr8 in it

Men are hard to please..!!!

aabla_pa December 7, 2006, 11:19am 6

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[QUOTE]
Something Gr8 in it

[/QUOTE]

Im glad somebody found something gr8 in it. Thanx all 4 appreciating.

Amal December 7, 2006, 12:46pm 7

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Nice one ablaa_pa :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh December 7, 2006, 1:21pm 8

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Buhat khoob aabla_pa, thanks for sharing.

lucky_lady December 9, 2006, 6:05pm 9

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bohat achi hai ,maza aa gya

IN SEARCH OF THE LITTLE PRINCESS

kaleemhk December 10, 2006, 6:15am 10

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Bohat aala........... thanks you ..................:))

Jhanjharewali December 10, 2006, 12:26pm 11

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Wah ji...kahan rehte itni muhabbat karne waale?

aabla_pa December 12, 2006, 6:16pm 12

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I wud like 2 say thank u to AMAL, GUL, Lucky Lady( AlLah aap ko aur LUCKY banaey. AMIN), Kaleem saab, and and and .. yeah .JHANJARWALI. Well is dunya mein muhabbat karnay walay kam hein, lekin hein.

par jis k reply ka intezaar tha, us ne to reply kia nahi :(

kahan hai tu k tere intezaar mein aey dost
tamaam raat sulagtay hein dil k weeraanay

Esix is evil...

takmeel December 14, 2006, 1:31pm 13

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kaun kahataa hai tujhe mai.n ne bhulaa rakhaa hai
tera baro sa para tha jo danda ab tk chupa rka hai

tuune jo dil ke a.ndhere me.n jalaayaa thaa kabhii
vo diyaa aaj tail ka dar sa bhuja rakha hai

dekh jaa aake mahakate huye zaKhmo.n kii bahaar
main na in pa perfume lga rkha hai

takmeel December 14, 2006, 1:36pm 14

Re: Kon Kehta Hai Tujhay Mein Ne Bhula Rakha Hai

kahan hai tu k tere intezaar mein aey dost
tamaam raat sulagtay hein dil k weeraanay

tera shero main na jana kasi kasak ha
hara hoa tarsa hoa lafzoo ki hamaq ha
jis ki rah main sulagta hain tera dil k warana
wo hkeqat nahi ha faqat ik dhnak ha

sory bt ap k is sher k yai jwab bnta tha