NJ, AQ
Justaju ki ujarr halon ki- Zara nawazi hay aap ki- Tahi dast, dam’n o dil hein, pass kuch bacha to nahi jo nesaar karein- Ba’ aj’z qaboliyat ke muntazir chand ttotte lafz hein … bikray howay .. khuch sehmay se- AAP ki nazar.
Kahein koi zakh’m Gulaab ho - aisa kab hota hay
Woh kisi sawal ka jawab ho - aisa kab hota hay
Azad! bhari ho rait, ra’t jagoon ki, aankhon main
Tabinda, bhole se koi khwab ho- aisa kab hota hay
Adab Arz
(Azad)
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Welcome
Bohat Khobsurat Ashaar hain....
:)
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adab
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NJ, AQ Justaju ki ujarr halon ki- Zara nawazi hay aap ki- Tahi dast, dam'n o dil hein, pass kuch bacha to nahi jo nesaar karein- Ba' aj'z qaboliyat ke muntazir chand ttotte lafz hein ... bikray howay .. khuch sehmay se- AAP ki nazar.
Kahein koi zakh'm Gulaab ho - aisa kab hota hay Woh kisi sawal ka jawab ho - aisa kab hota hay Azad! bhari ho rait, ra't jagoon ki, aankhon main Tabinda, bhole se koi khwab ho- aisa kab hota hay
Adab Arz
(Azad)
thanks and beautiful sher hmmmmmmm tu ap itnay din bed per khwab maiN paRay rahya :D bata daitey ph kaR daite ph tu recive kaR he saktey they ap :p
welcome back i hope U wud NOW stay with us nachezz :p
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Jo (lekha) samajh na aay uss ki tareef nahi karte :)
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Kahein koi zakh'm Gulaab ho - aisa kab hota hay Woh kisi sawal ka jawab ho - aisa kab hota hay Azad! bhari ho rait, ra't jagoon ki, aankhon main Tabinda, bhole se koi khwab ho- aisa kab hota hay (Azad)
Khoob again. Tell me what's bhari ho rait, ra't jagoon ki. And what's* Tabinda.*
I'll try putting your poem into English verse. Cheers.
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kia fayda? ang'raisi to samajh aay gi nahi :(
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kia fayda? ang'raisi to samajh aay gi nahi :(
kya punjabi samajh aati hai?
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Kahein koi zakh’m Gulaab ho - aisa kab hota hay
hota hai .. bilkul hota hai… apnaY dil maiN mohabbat aur khuloos rakho geY tau hotaa hai… kissi ko nazar naheeN aataa par hotaa hai:(
Woh kisi sawal ka jawab ho - aisa kab hota hay
Khamoshi bhee ik jawaab hai, naheeN?
Azad! bhari ho rait, ra’t jagoon ki, aankhon main
Tabinda, bhole se koi khwab ho- aisa kab hota hay
Allah kaY haaN har khwaab sharminda-e-taa’beer hotaa hai… hammaiN ba’az dafaa iss duniyaa maiN naheeN miltaa busss 
welcome back
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nice!
waisay Tabinda kon haiN?
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ap kub say poetry karnay lagay 
btw very niceee :k:
PS
Hmmmmm 
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Jo lut'f aapki shayari meiN hai, woh aur kahaN!
Good to see you back :-)
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Wooo look who is here.. what a come back acha laga aap ko wapis dekh kar... umeed hai ka aap aab apni achi shahairy hum say share kartay rahain gay...
by the way howa kiya tha itnay din kahan thay aap..
Agan what a come back
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Khub:k:
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kya punjabi samajh aati hai?
Urdu thorri bohut ... samajhne wali baat samajh aa-jati hay
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Wooo look who is here.. what a come back acha laga aap ko wapis dekh kar... umeed hai ka aap aab apni achi shahairy hum say share kartay rahain gay...
by the way howa kiya tha itnay din kahan thay aap..
Agan what a come back
Nawazish dilsay aap ne ache lafzon main yaad kia
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Shab-e-hijar ke baad
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pata nahi kahan se aa’jate hein
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Jo lut'f aapki shayari meiN hai, woh aur kahaN!
Good to see you back :-)
or penhaan hein jo raaz Khamosh nigahon main woh kisi or aankh main kahan :)
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Anwar Bhai