Koi yaad hi rakht-e safar thehrey

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Berhi_Bee March 12, 2006, 3:23pm 1

**Koi yaad hi rakht-e safar thehrey, koi raah-guzar unjaani ho

jab tak meri um’r jawaan rahey, aur ye tasweer puraani ho

koi naao kahee.n manjhdhaar main dobey, chand sey uljhey aur udher
moujoo.n ki wo hi halqa-bandi, darya ki wo hi tughiyaani ho

is raat aur din k mailey main, tera haath chutey merey haathoo.n sey
terey saath teri tanhaai ho, merey saath meri weeraani ho

kiya dhondhtey hain? kiya kho bethey? kis ujlat main hai log yahan?
sar-e raah kuch aise miltey hain, jaise koi rasn nibh’haani ho

hum kab tak apney haathoo.n sey khud apney leye dewaar chunain
kabhi tujh sey hukum udoli ho, kabhi hum sey na-farmaani ho

kuch yaadain aur kitabain hoon, mera ishq ho aur yaaraney hoon
isi aab-o hawa main rehna ho aur saari um’r beetani ho**

Amal March 12, 2006, 7:28pm 2

Re: Koi yaad hi rakht-e safar thehrey

Bohat khoob Berhi_Bee:k:…achi ghazal hey…thanx for sharing with us

Zamil March 12, 2006, 8:05pm 3

Re: Koi yaad hi rakht-e safar thehrey

Wah Wa. Gteat selection, and ofcourse, of a beautiful mind.
Khush rahiye B B. 8-)

Berhi_Bee March 13, 2006, 12:27pm 4

Re: Koi yaad hi rakht-e safar thehrey

thx amal and zamil :)

being_lonely March 13, 2006, 2:01pm 5

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salam bee cute ghazal n zamil ko zalim likha like it carez asta lavista n chao

being_lonely March 13, 2006, 2:01pm 6

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salam bee cute ghazal n zamil ko zalim likha like it carez asta lavista n chao

Prince_Ali March 13, 2006, 4:57pm 7

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:k:

Berhi_Bee March 13, 2006, 5:12pm 8

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hehe…bus jaldi main daihan nahi diya zamil ko zalim perh gayee

Berhi_Bee March 13, 2006, 5:13pm 9

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thx all :)

Zamil March 13, 2006, 10:09pm 10

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Acha kia edit kar dia varna mujhe Zalim:mad: ban-na parrta.
Waise ye to barre sukoon ki jaga hai,
yahan bhi jaldi mein aana hota hai aap ka !?!

Decent_Munda March 14, 2006, 8:24am 11

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** kiya dhondhtey hain? kiya kho bethey? kis ujlat main hai log yahan?
sar-e raah kuch aise miltey hain, jaise koi rasn nibh’haani ho

Gr8 aba bee :k:
**

being_lonely March 14, 2006, 11:27am 12

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zindagii jab bhii terii bazm me.n laatii hai hame.n
ye zamii.n chaa.Nd se behatar nazar aatii hai hame.n

surKh phuulo.n se mahak uThatii hai.n dil kii raahe.n
din Dhale yuu.N terii aavaaz bulaatii hai hame.n

HeArT_HaCKeR March 14, 2006, 11:45am 13

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Boht khoob.. .:k:..

Berhi_Bee March 14, 2006, 5:18pm 14

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her her jagah hi jaldi main hoti hoon

p.s: thx alll …khoush rehain