koi to hai jo hava'aoN ke par katartaa hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

KinaRa May 24, 2002, 12:21am 1

*zaraa saa qataraa kahiN aaj agar ubharta hai samandaroN hi ke lahaje meiN baat kartaa hai

khuli chatoN ke diye kab ke bujh gaye hote
koi to hai jo hava’aoN ke par katartaa hai

zameeN ki kaisi viqaalat ho phir nahiN chalti
jab aasmaan se koi faisalaa utarataa hai

tum aa gaye ho to phir kuchh chaNdni si baateiN hooN
zamiN pe chaaNd kahaaN roz roz utarataa hai

~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~

system May 24, 2002, 12:23am 2

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Originally posted by KinaRa:
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khuli chatoN ke diye kab ke bujh gaye hote
koi to hai jo hava'aoN ke par katartaa hai

zameeN ki kaisi viqaalat ho phir nahiN chalti
jab aasmaan se koi faisalaa utarataa hai

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bohot khoob !!

dil dariya, samandaron donge .. kaun dillan di- yan jane ..
jane na jane gul hi na jane .. baggh to sara jane .. ;~)

chand_chehra May 24, 2002, 1:32am 3

very Nice kinara ge

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MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kÃ®BàÎå H@ï

Amjad_Chohan May 24, 2002, 10:24am 4

tum aa gaye ho to phir kuchh chaNdni si baateiN hooN
zamiN pe chaaNd kahaaN roz roz utarataa hai

CC Kinara aap ko tu nahi kah raahy yeh

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KinaRa May 25, 2002, 7:35pm 5

[quote]
Originally posted by NaasPeeta:
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thanks

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~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~

KinaRa May 25, 2002, 7:36pm 6

thanks C_C…

~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~

KinaRa May 25, 2002, 7:42pm 7

koi sunay tu..dekha C_C…Amjad Bro…therr
kitni taiz chez aur ap …

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samjhi he nahi
i thought k Bro…therrrrr…is very masoom

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Shab-e-Hijar May 26, 2002, 12:17am 8

acchi gazal ha kinara bro

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speed_master May 26, 2002, 4:56am 9

Nice

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I’m Gonna Be The Champ
The Way I Wanna Be

Rude Boyz Rulez

Perfectionist May 26, 2002, 6:08pm 10

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Capricorn May 27, 2002, 5:19pm 11

Kaun hai woh?

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Nayab May 27, 2002, 5:29pm 12

Capricorn jee main ho…yeh kia baat hohee…keh koun hai woh…aap bhi na eshi hi batain kiya karhe…poetry ko pardhe…

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Nice kinara jee…Bohot khoob

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Capricorn May 27, 2002, 5:55pm 13

Marteeeeeeee hai

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kinara gee isay samjhao

Amjad_Chohan May 27, 2002, 8:39pm 14

Nahi nahiiii … masoom tu sirf buchay hootay hain like U Kinara Bro

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juMurA May 28, 2002, 7:23am 15

Bohat-khoob

KinaRa May 28, 2002, 5:55pm 16

thanks

~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~

KinaRa May 28, 2002, 5:58pm 17

thanks perrrr…fec…jee

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~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~

KinaRa May 28, 2002, 6:00pm 18

Pm main will tell u

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~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~

KinaRa May 28, 2002, 6:07pm 19

how do u know i am masoom and ** Bacha **

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~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~

KinaRa May 28, 2002, 6:10pm 20

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Originally posted by juMurA:
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Bohat-khoob**
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thanks jumra

~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~