Koi to aaey...

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Jo dayaar-e-hasti ke ujaarr rastoN pe zaindagi ke deeye jalaaey
koi to aaey
jo khaam’shi ki dabeez chaadar apney haathoN sey chaak kar ke
koo-e-zulm-o-be’kasi meiN daad-rasi ki sadaa lagaaey
koi to aaey
rat’jagoN ke taareek lamhoN meiN jugnuooN ki lagaam thaamey
koi subak, meharbaaN, shafeeq sitaara roshni ka alam utthaey
koi to aaey
jo nigaar-e-hasti ki shikastagi ko apney hissey ke rang bakhshey
jo malaal-e-hasti ke taveel sehra pe mohabbaton ka abar giraaey
koi to aaey
jo was’wasoN ke sitam-qadey meiN ehsaas-e-gham ka zor torrey
jo saqoot-e-dil ki khizaaN ruton meiN chahatoN ke kaNwal ugaaey
koi to aaey…

By: Amal**

Re: Koi to aaey...

Lo hum aa gaey:-d

Beautiful ,zabardast, amazing ,cool ,i love it, thanks for sharing:-)

Re: Koi to aaey...

Very nice as usual! but i tell you " koi nahi aata" kissi k pass itna time nahi hoota bahi.... i guess ub sumagh hi lo iss fact ko :(

Amal why not we give you "life time achievement award" aap ki poems ki tareef kay liye i have seen now people dont have words. :)

Re: Koi to aaey…

Gul thanx for liking the poem.

Bholay Bisray, your statement itself amounts to a “life time achievement award” for me. I thank you :):flower1:

Re: Koi to aaey…

:bism:

:salam:

:subhan: :alhamd: :jazak: Khoob, zabardast, jawab naheen, Masha Allah.

Main ajaoon kia???

Main to yay kahoon gi

Is khudgharzi ki doar main achay logon ko khudgharz loag hain miltay
Jabaja bharay hain khudgharz loag baygharz loag naheen miltay

Re: Koi to aaey...

Some typing mistake I think

Qaday naheen balkay Kaday

Yaqeenan bura naheen manain gi. Mujhay yaqeen hai meri ghaltion ko bhi point out karnay main aap dair naheen lagain gi.

Re: Koi to aaey…

kamal…kertay hein app bhe

yaani nice poem:D

hmm:aq:…now i came to know…that’s y u r moderator.:bummer:…coz of ur nice:faizy: poetry

Re: Koi to aaey...

masoomSiLakri and fazeeat, thanx a lot for liking the poem and pointing out the error also :)

Re: Koi to aaey...

Amal Welldone doosta ........

*Jo Koi Aay To shukar Kar, Jo Nah Koi Aay To Sabar Kar
To Raza-e-janan Pah Jaan Day Kah Iss He Main Hay Teri Bahtari *

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Boht khoob.. nice to see yew back, keep sharing :)

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You welcome Amal ji.

Kia hai na mujhay aik bemari hai main error free zone her jagah aur her insaan ko banana chahti hoon jubkay khud main hazaron khamiaan hain albatta unhi error ki nishandahi karti hoon jo khud naheen karti. Mujhay yay bhi maloom hai kay typing error bhi hotay hain. Mujhay yaqeen hai aap nain hargiz bura naheen manaya hoga.

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Jigar Amal....Khushbash,

Nazm Parh kar Ek Khalish, Ek Hook Si Uthi Man Main, Yeh Nazm Maine Kyun Nahi Kahi ?

Darwesh.

Re: Koi to aaey...

maasoomSiLarki, I did not mind at all. You are always welcome to say anything you like and anything that you don't. And this is true for all of my readers. :)

darwesh bhara ye aap hi ki hey. Aap ki diary meiN sey chorri kar ke hum ney apney naam sey yahaaN post kar daali, bas ye kahaani hey saari :)

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lo ap ka intzaar khtam Aymal :p Nikami a ga'ee....beautiful asusal...:) hum ne sooncha is dafa sarey waday lok pahlay jain like Bb Gul-e-Tea ....:)

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Bismillah NikamiJi, time mil gaya aap ko? :(

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Nikami tu tame niqal he laiti hia..per hor lokoN k barey main kia kaha jaiey :(

Re: Koi to aaey...

so nice sharing janab bohut zabardast

Re: Koi to aaey...

again........very very very very very very very very very nice!

Re: Koi to aaey…

Lijiy Agay ab boliy:chai:

Re: Koi to aaey...

very nice poem, Amal.

thanks for sharing.
Dushwari