Koi Sunta Nahi KHUDA Ke Siwa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

being_lonely April 16, 2008, 7:35pm 1

Asalam u Alaikum !

Koi chaara nahin duaa k siwa
Koi sunta nahin KHUDA k siwa

Mujh se kya ho saka wafa k siwa
Mujh ko milta bhi kya saza k siwa

Dil sabhi kuch zaban par laya
Ik faqat arz-e-mudda k siwa

Barsar-e-sahil-e-muqam yahan
Kaun ubhra hai nakhuda k siwa

Dil sabhi kuch zuban par laya
Ik faqat arz-e-mudda k siwa

Ye “Hafeez” ah ah par akhir
Kya kahein dost wah wah k siwa

BeIng lOnely !!! sId !!!

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_Masoom_Muskaan April 16, 2008, 7:48pm 2

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ummm

Aryaan April 16, 2008, 8:25pm 3

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Very Nice $iD..:k:

Sabsay_Chota_Bacha April 16, 2008, 8:26pm 4

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O-o

Shab-e-Hijar April 16, 2008, 10:43pm 5

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Aqls April 17, 2008, 8:15am 6

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achha kalaam hai,kiska hai..?

chhote behr ke kalaam ka bhi apna alag hi lutf hota hai

shukriyaah :)

S.786 April 17, 2008, 9:22am 7

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buhut umda :)

have you ever

being_lonely April 17, 2008, 2:50pm 8

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Thanks Every1

being_lonely April 17, 2008, 2:51pm 9

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Hafeez Jalandhari Ka Kalaam Hai ! Thanks

the mineral brightening pressed powder

Koyal April 18, 2008, 3:59am 10

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nice 1 lonley :)

being_lonely April 18, 2008, 3:19pm 11

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Shukriya Koyal Jee !

Shumaisa April 18, 2008, 3:55pm 12

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hmm Nice..

system April 18, 2008, 4:50pm 13

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very touching.

Sheal April 18, 2008, 5:08pm 14

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nice sharing BL :)

mama_ki_dua April 18, 2008, 5:13pm 15

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Very nice poetry :)

being_lonely April 18, 2008, 5:40pm 16

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Thanks ! n welcome on paklins njoy ur stay

Shukram shum jee

Thanks sheal sis

Thanks MKD !

wedding at home?

mama_ki_dua April 21, 2008, 2:19am 17

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Moat k baad yaad aa raha hai koi, mitti meri kabr se utha raha hai koi,
Ya khuda do pal ki mohlat aur de de, udas meri kabr se ja raha hai koi.

mama_ki_dua April 21, 2008, 2:19am 18

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hum hi mein na thi koi baat ...yaad na tum ko aa sake

tumne hamein bhula diya ...humna tumhein bhula sake

Dushwari April 21, 2008, 2:25am 19

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very nice. being able to eventually become the obvious is a nice thing - the technique used in this poem by saying 'except'... carries the indication of what it is, without saying what it is.

sad thing is in this life, it cannt be easily picked up on by many or most.
in any event, a very nice poem.
thanks for sharing.

best,
Dushwari

mama_ki_dua April 21, 2008, 2:29am 20

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:)