koi mujhe to mera

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 24, 2002, 10:00pm

koi mujhe ko mera bahr-por sarapa laa dea
mere bazoo,mere ankhein,mera chehra laa dea

aisa dariya jo kisi aur samander mein gerae
is se behtar hai ke mujhe ko mera sehra laa dea

kuch nahi chahe tumjhe se aa mere umar-ravaan
mera buch-pan,mere jugnoo,mere guria la dea

jis ke aankh mujhe andar se bhi pahr sakte hai ho
koi cehraa to mere saher mein aisa laa dea

kishtee jaa to bahnwar mein hai kaee barsoon se
aa khuda ab to duboo dae yah kenara laa dea

Noshi Gillani

if there is any mistake of urdu roman than i am really sorry.

Dilsay · December 25, 2002, 12:16pm

Re: koi mujhe to mera

This is beautiful… kabhi kabhi aap bohat he Dilsay likhteen hain…

nikii · December 25, 2002, 1:28pm

bhut khoob :)

arifnawaz1 · December 25, 2002, 8:09pm

Beautiful :k::k::k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 25, 2002, 9:31pm

thanks a lot
dilsay
nikkii
arifnawaz

dilsay haan, jub dil bohut udass hota hai na to dil khud he lag jata hai:( aur yeh mere poetry nahi.collection zaror hai:)

Jaan_Lewaa · December 25, 2002, 9:54pm

bhut khoob:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 25, 2002, 10:12pm

thanks jaan lewaa:flower1:

Jaan_Lewaa · December 25, 2002, 10:14pm

u kum kum

Azad · December 25, 2002, 10:18pm

bohut hi khoob

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 25, 2002, 10:22pm

apka mujhe kum kum ajj tak nahi samhaj aaia:confused:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 25, 2002, 10:23pm

thanks azad:)

Jaan_Lewaa · December 25, 2002, 10:23pm

it meanz “u wel kum”

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 25, 2002, 10:25pm

Azad · December 25, 2002, 10:29pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
thanks azad:)
[/QUOTE]

Koi baat nahi baRay shehron main aisi choTi choTi batain hoti hi rehi hain

Jaan_Lewaa · December 25, 2002, 10:30pm

ab samajh mai aya

Lamhay · December 26, 2002, 9:13am

Re: koi mujhe to mera

bahut hi khoob ghazal par kia kabhi kuch kho kay wapis mila shayad kabhi nahin bhanwar main phans kar wapis tu aya jasakata hai
per jo takleefain jhili jachuki hongi bhanwar main woh wapis nahin asakhti !

Mano85 · December 26, 2002, 11:25am

kuch nahi chahe tumjhe se aa mere umar-ravaan
mera buch-pan,mere jugnoo,mere guria la dea

Thanx for sharin’ sis :k:

Dilsay · December 26, 2002, 1:04pm

Very nice…

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 27, 2002, 4:55am

\

aa gaya:)thanks for explaning:flower1:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 27, 2002, 5:05am

thanks a lot
lamhay
mano85

u welcome mano85
lamhay i know what u r saying.u r right jo koh jaein woh khabhi nahi milta per akhair takleefain dil waloon ke qismat mein he kion hain?khabhi khusee kion nahi aate.woh aik sher hai na~~~

zindagee mustaqel ghum ke siwa kuch bhi nahi shaiyad
khusse bhi aatee hai to ansoo ban kar beh jatee hai

dilsay ap aik baat bataein yeh ap ne Very nice… mano85 ko kis baat per kaha:confused: samhaj nahi aaia;)yah phir woh ketein hai na mehboob ke her seh se piayar ho jata hai;) (hope u dont mind)